ayushiiiarya wrote:
RE APPLICANTHello Everyone,
I request a
profile review for ISB, I am planning to apply in R1 for ISB
GMAT: 700 ( V35, Q50, AWA 5.5, IR 8 ):
Should I re-attempt GMAT? I had a very bad test day.
My current plan is to write GMAT in the next few weeks and aim for a better V score.
Current Profile-
Acads:
B.E. EEE, BITS Pilani : 7.77
XII: 92% (CBSE)
X: 10 cgpa (CBSE)
Work Ex:
6 months as a software development intern at a leading MNC
3+ years as Energy Market Analyst at Energy Exemplar ( 1 promotion )
Full-time work ex is in technical customer success role. Worked with clients from different regions across EMEA. Provided customized on-site and off-site training and workshops to them
Ex-Curricular:
Completed 6-month leadership workshop organized by the company
Won company-wide Hackathon in 2021.
Won an ideation event "Futurethon" where we had to suggest another product that the company can add to its portfolio in the next 5 years
Won "Share the future" award - Quarterly CEO award for excellent client engagement
An active member of the Nirmaan organization
Interests:
Reading books, Painting, took up new activities like swimming and surfing
Long-term and short-term goals-
Short term goal is to get into a strategy consulting role, Long term goal is to build something of my own preferably in ed tech or work in a high level corporate strategy role
My questions-
1. I was rejected last year in R2 ( not even waitlisted ), with the same profile. If anyone can provide me feedback as to what may have been wrong, I can work on that ( OFC, apart from my below par GMAT )
2. I am planning to re-take GMAT. What other aspects should I work on?
3. I feel my ex curricular are lacking, any suggestions on how can I improve it over next few months? Or how can I present it better?
4. I got the LOR from my direct manager in India team, should I get an LOR from someone in Europe? ( I work closely with EMEA team and have a manager there as well)
5. I can share my essays in case anyone will be kind enough to review them, as they would have also contributed to the reject.
Hey there,
We appreciate you sharing your profile and aspirations with us. Your interest in the tech space, especially your achievements in hackathons and ideation events, certainly caught our attention. Here's our take on your profile:
- Your academics and GMAT score are quite competitive, with your score meeting the typical requirements for ISB. Although if you're not satisfied and feel you can improve, especially on the verbal section, then by all means, go for it! For extracurriculars, it seems you've shown leadership and innovation in your workplace, which is great. However, your perception of it lacking might be due to less involvement in community services or hobbies that demonstrate personal growth and breadth. If time allows, consider engaging in activities related to your interests or passions.
- It's refreshing to see an Energy Market Analyst looking to transition into a strategy consulting role. Your long-term goal to build something in the ed tech sector is intriguing, but might need a bit more fleshing out. What draws you to this sector, and what unique value or approach do you believe you could bring?
- Your work experience and the transition from a software development intern to an Energy Market Analyst are noteworthy. The progression and promotion indicate your potential. But remember, it's not just about the roles you've held, but the impact you've made. Highlight instances where you have had significant accomplishments or have gone above and beyond your job description.
- As for what to focus on next, it's indeed a good idea to retake the GMAT if you're confident about improving your score. Meanwhile, try to spend some time reflecting on your experiences, achievements, and lessons learned. This will help you articulate your story better, showing not just what you've done, but who you are.
- Answering your questions:
1. The reasons for not being selected could be many, from how well your essays were written, to how well your experiences and goals were aligned. 2. Besides GMAT, work on portraying your story and your uniqueness in essays.
3. Improving extracurriculars could involve taking up leadership roles in volunteering, or more active participation in hobbies.
4. An LOR from someone in Europe might offer a diverse perspective, but ensure it's someone who knows your work well.
5. Sure, sharing your essays would give us a clearer picture of potential areas for improvement. You're welcome to send them to us.
Hope this assessment brings clarity to your path forward. We're here to help, so don't hesitate to reach out with more queries or for further assistance! Best of luck!