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Some coral reefs are damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness can restore their previous splendor.


A) damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness-> Why are we saying as "damaged to such a large degree ". We can say "so damaged".

B) so damaged that neither government protection nor the awareness of the public-> "government protection" is not comparable with "the awareness of the public".

C) so damaged that neither government protection nor public awareness-> Both errors are corrected and no new error introduced. Let's keep it.

D) so damaged that neither government protection or public awareness-> neither...nor is correct idiom. There is an Idiom error here.

E) damaged to a large enough degree that neither government protection nor public awareness-> why are we saying as "damaged to a large enough degree ". We can say "so damaged".

So, I think C. :)
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Some coral reefs are damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness can restore their previous splendor.


A) damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness
'so damaged that' is better than 'damaged to such a large degree'

B) so damaged that neither government protection nor the awareness of the public
'public awareness' is more concise than 'awareness of the public'.

C) so damaged that neither government protection nor public awareness
Correct

D) so damaged that neither government protection or public awareness
neither...or... is incorrect

E) damaged to a large enough degree that neither government protection nor public awareness
'so damaged that' is better than 'damaged to a large enough degree'

Choice C is the answer.

Originally posted by jhavyom on 27 Dec 2020, 00:59.
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Some coral reefs are damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness can restore their previous splendor.

Correct Idiom use:

Neither X nor Y; X & Y should be parallel

A) damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness - this is not concise, GMAT prefers concise sentence with clear meaning which "so ...that" rightfully expresses

B) so damaged that neither government protection nor the awareness of the public - "public awareness" is concise and //

C) so damaged that neither government protection nor public awareness

D) so damaged that neither government protection or public awareness - wrong idiom use

E) damaged to a large enough degree that neither government protection nor public awareness - - this is not concise, GMAT prefers concise sentence with clear meaning which "so ...that" rightfully expresses

IMO C
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Some coral reefs are damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness can restore their previous splendor.


A) damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness
'damaged to such a large degree' is wordy. There exists better solutions.

B) so damaged that neither government protection nor the awareness of the public
Not ||. Neither X nor the Y.

C) so damaged that neither government protection nor public awareness
Correct use of the idiom pair so.. that. || for neither x nor y.

D) so damaged that neither government protection or public awareness
Wrong use of pair neither... nor.

E) damaged to a large enough degree that neither government protection nor public awareness
Same reasoning as A.
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Ans C

A) damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness INCORRECT
This option is not grammatically incorrect, but just not concise.

B) so damaged that neither government protection nor the awareness of the public INCORRECT
awareness of the public and government protection is not parallel.

C) so damaged that neither government protection nor public awareness CORRECT
This option is concise and also conveys intended meaning.

D) so damaged that neither government protection or public awareness INCORRECT
Incorrect usage of Neither ..Or..

E) damaged to a large enough degree that neither government protection nor public awareness INCORRECT
This option is very wordy.
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Some coral reefs are damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness can restore their previous splendor.


A) damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness Incorrect

idioms error - such a large degree

B) so damaged that neither government protection nor the awareness of the public Incorrect

parallelism error - .........government protection...............the awareness of the public

C) so damaged that neither government protection nor public awareness Correct

D) so damaged that neither government protection or public awareness Incorrect

idioms error - ......neither ...........or ..........

E) damaged to a large enough degree that neither government protection nor public awareness Incorrect

idioms error - a large enough degree
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The answer is C.

A- looks fine, let us check the other options.
B- awareness of the public? public awareness is far better, so can be deleted.
C- So...that, neither....nor(idioms are correct)and this option is concise, the more concise, the better - at this point we can also eliminate option A, as C a better option.
D- neither, or? wrong idiom usage.
E- damaged to a large enough degree - wordy.

So, IMO, C is the best answer.
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IMO C

A) damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness -- the sentence is unnecessarily longer than C

B) so damaged that neither government protection nor the awareness of the public -- Awareness of Pubic - meaning error.

C) so damaged that neither government protection nor public awareness - Perfect construct and meaning is ok

D) so damaged that neither government protection or public awareness -- Unidiomatic

E) damaged to a large enough degree that neither government protection nor public awareness -- Long and meaning error.
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