OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Some coral reefs are damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness can restore their previous splendor.
• ISSUES
→
Neither must be paired with
nor→ In
neither X nor Y, the X and Y elements must be parallel
→
So X that Y is tested fairly often
So X that Y indicates results. Attribute X is so extreme in this case that Y results.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) damaged to such a large degree that neither government protection nor public awareness
• the sentence is grammatical, but typically we would say, ". . . damaged to such a degree that . . . "
→
such in that case would mean "of so extreme a degree or quality," as defined
here.• the phrasing is a bit inelegant, but otherwise I see no errors
KEEP, but look for a better answer.
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B) so damaged that neither government protection nor the awareness of the public
• The meaning and idiomatic usage are fine.
→ The reefs are so damaged that P and Q cannot restore the reefs.
• The X and Y elements in
Neither X nor Y are not as parallel as they could be
X = government protection
Y = the awareness of the public
Either X should be
the protection of the government or Y should be
public awareness so that the X and Y elements are parallel
Still, I do not see enough error to eliminate this choice.
KEEP, but look for a better answer.
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C) so damaged that neither government protection nor public awareness
• This option is better than (A) and (B)
→
so damaged that is more succinct and more idiomatic than
to such a large degree→
government protection (the X element) and
public awareness (the Y element) are parallel
ELIMINATE A AND B.
KEEP C
Quote:
D) so damaged that neither government protection or public awareness
•
neither, if paired, is always paired with
nor. Neither is never paired with
or.ELIMINATE D
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E) damaged to a large enough degree that neither government protection nor public awareness
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to a large enough degree is just all kinds of wrong
→ We have already determined that option C is better than option A, and option E is not much different from option A (in fact, (E) is worse).
Again, we might say "to such a degree," but even that phrase is less concise than "so damaged that."
Option C is better than E.
ELIMINATE E
The answer is C.COMMENTSRashmikaAnegama , welcome to SC Butler.
Almost all of these explanations range from very good to outstanding.
Future readers will learn from your different styles.
Nicely done.