egmat
jeetmech152
Hi
e-gmat,
Please explain what 'it' refers to in the opening modifier of correct choice.
and why ans choice C is incorrect.
Thanks,
Hi,
Thank you for your query.

I will certainly help you understand the correct choice and the use of “it” in the same. However, before I do that, I would like to request you to kindly provide me with your meaning and error analysis of the original sentence along with your analysis of the correct choice. If your answer is different from the OA, kindly include in your analysis the reasons for marking the alternate choice as the correct answer. Your analysis will help me in addressing not only this particular doubt but also any possible conceptual gap in your understanding. Hope you'll appreciate the same.

Regards,
Neeti.
Hi Neeti,
Here is the analysis:
To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, and she remained in France during the Second World War as a performer and an intelligence agent for the Resistance
Meaning: Long before a fashion to be an expatriate arrived, Josephine baker lived in paris(Which was her native place).
During WW2 she lived in France as a performer and an intelligence agent for the resistance.
Error analysis:
cl1: To Josephine Baker,
Paris was her home long before
it was fashionable to be an expatriate,and
cl2:
She remained in France during the Second World War as
a performer and
an intelligence agent for the Resistance
S-
V pairs are fine , Verb Tense--> All events in the sentence are properly set in the past,
Pronoun-->
in cl1 'it' is missing an antecedent., 'she' in cl2 clearly refers to J.B,
Modifier-->' Long before....expatriate' is correctly telling us abt when was paris home to J.B. ,
Parallelism-List in cl2 is parallel, No Idioms, Meaning is clear,
Others-->
Her in cl1 is redundant ,
Subject of cl1 and that of cl2, which is not underlined, should refer to same entity i.e. J.B in this case, but the subject of cl1 is paris, which is an incorrect referencePOE:
A. To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate -
Wrong: for the above mentioned reasons.
B. For Josephine baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Paris was her home -
Wrong:This choice repeats the errors in choice A
C. Josephine baker made Paris her home long before to be an expatriate was fashionable -
Correct: All the errors in original choice are rectified.
D. Long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Josephine Baker made Paris her home -
Wrong: Pronoun 'it' has no antecedent.
E. Long before it was fashionable being an expatriate, Paris was home to Josephine Baker -
wrong: J.B. should be subject of cl1, pronoun 'it' has no antecedent
With the analysis above, I selected choice C as the correct answer. However, the OA is choice D. Please let me know where did I falter in my analysis.Thanks.