Hello Everyone!
Let's tackle this question, one problem at a time, to narrow it down to the correct choice! First, here is the original question with any major differences between the options highlighted in
orange:
A new study suggests that the conversational pace of everyday life may be so brisk
it hampers the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words and, the result is, to make sense of speech.
(A)
it hampers the ability of some children
for distinguishing discrete sounds and words
and, the result is, to make(B)
that it hampers the ability of some children
to distinguish discrete sounds and words
and, as a result, to make(C)
that it hampers the ability of some children
to distinguish discrete sounds and words
and, the result of this, they are unable to make(D)
that it hampers the ability of some children
to distinguish discrete sounds and words
, and results in not making(E)
as to hamper the ability of some children
for distinguishing discrete sounds and words
, resulting in being unable to makeAfter a quick glance over the options, there are a few things we can focus on:
1. it hampers / that it hampers / as to hamper
2. for distinguishing / to distinguish
3. Their endings Let's start with #1 on our list, which is an issue of idiom structure. The idiom we are trying to use here is this:
so X that YHere is how each option uses (or misuses) this idiom:
(A)
it hampers the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words and, the result is, to make --> so X Y -->
WRONG(B)
that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words and, as a result, to make --> so X that Y -->
GOOD(C)
that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words and, the result of this, they are unable to make --> so X that Y -->
GOOD(D)
that it hampers the ability of some children to distinguish discrete sounds and words, and results in not making --> so X that Y -->
GOOD(E)
as to hamper the ability of some children for distinguishing discrete sounds and words, resulting in being unable to make --> so X as to Y -->
WRONGWe can eliminate options A & E because they don't adhere to the idiom structure "so X that Y." (It turns out we could also eliminate options A & E because they also incorrectly use the "for verb+ing" structure instead of the correct "to verb" in this sentence.)Now that we've narrowed it down to 3 options, let's take a closer look at how each option ends, and look for any glaring issues. I'll give you a hint: it has something to do with
parallelism!
(B) that it hampers the ability of some children
to distinguish discrete sounds and words and, as a result,
to makeThis is our
CORRECT option! It uses parallel structure with "to distinguish" and "to make!" It also uses the correct idiom structure "so X that Y."
(C) that it hampers the ability of some children
to distinguish discrete sounds and words and, the result of this,
they are unable to makeThis is
INCORRECT because it doesn't use parallel structure to describe the two things that are hampered in the sentence. Because of this, we can rule this option out.
(D) that it hampers the ability of some children
to distinguish discrete sounds and words, and
results in not makingThis is also
INCORRECT because it doesn't use parallel structure to describe the two things being hampered in the sentence!
There you have it - option B is the correct choice because it follows the "so X that Y" idiom structure and uses parallelism correctly!Don't study for the GMAT. Train for it.