A recent review of pay scales indicates
that CEOs now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times in 1980.
Option Elimination -
Apologies if I hurt anyone's feelings by using numbers here for the sake of clarity. Let's assume the blue-collar work salary is $10, so the CEO salary is how much? $4190. Let's unpack the options, keeping this in mind while we still have our sentence correction hat on.
(A) that CEOs now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times - CEOs now earn $4190 compared to 42 times? 42 times what? 42 times nothing. That's an issue we are comparing a salary with a ratio. Now let's put on SC hat. "compared" is an "ed" verbal that modifies nouns. What is the nearest noun? Workers. Does it make sense? No. Moreover, when we use X times or double or triple, we don't use more/less. Why? Because it doesn't make sense. You have twice the money I have is ok, but saying You have twice more the money I have is not ok. I am okay with you having more money than me
But please don't spoil the language. We love it.
(B) that, on average, CEOs now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, a ratio that compares to 42 times - CEOs now earn $4190, a ratio (what? Is $4190 a ratio? No) "that" refers to ratio, so if we simplify the sentence "CEOs now earn $4190, a ratio compared to 42 times in 1980? 42 times what in 1980? Isn't it ridiculous?
(C) that, on average, CEOs now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio - CEOs now earn $4190, as compared to $420 (42 times their pay. Whose pay? CEOs. No, they can't earn 42 times their pay. It refers to workers. So, 42 times workers' pay. What is workers pay? $10) in 1980. So, for clarity, here is how it looks: "CEOs now earn $4190, as compared to $420 in 1980." It effectively compares the earnings of CEOs in the present to their earnings in 1980. Again, I am sorry if I hurt anyone's feelings by dragging numbers into English.
Now, if we put on our SC hat. "as" introduces adverbial here, modifying the verb "earn," and that makes perfect sense.
Let's add a bit of masala here. Could we correct option B by adding "their pay" after 42 times? If we say, "CEOs now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, a ratio that compares to 42 times their pay in 1980? Let's unpack this: CEOs now earn $4190, a ratio compared to $420 in 1980. Does it make sense? No. Say what C says. CEOs now earn $4190, as compared to $420 in 1980
(D) CEOs who now earn on average 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio - A recent review of pay scales indicates CEOs? No.
(E) CEOs now earning an average of 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, compared to the ratio of 42 times - A recent review of pay scales indicates CEOs now earning an average of $4190, compared to the ratio of 42 times. First, it should be "CEOs now earn," and comparing $4190 with 42 times is wrong.