Pankaj0901 wrote:
AndrewN - Request your explanation please.
I am not quite able to understand the structure of the last sentence. I request you to please help break it down for me into Subject+verbs and associated clauses for this sentence:
The claims that only the most reliable companies pursue DTC ads and therefore, this data is expected, are not rooted on facts since a number of such heavily advertised drugs have been shown to have long term safety problems.
If my understanding is correct, the subordinate clause starting with "that" is as follows:
The claims that
only the most reliable companies pursue DTC ads and therefore, this data is expected, are not rooted on facts since a number of such heavily advertised drugs have been shown to have long term safety problems.
-> But why the sentence:
, this data is expected, has a comma pair?
this sentence is immediately followed by "are"- how can a verb start immediately after a comma?
Hello,
Pankaj0901. I understand your confusion. Whatever the source of the question may be, that last line is problematic. I will offer my interpretation of what I
think the sentence is aiming to convey. The subject of the sentence is
the claims. After that, the subordinate clause begins and does not resolve until the main clause picks up again with
are not rooted on [
sic]. (The idiom is
rooted in, not
rooted on.) A second
that would help us better understand the parallel elements:
a) that only the most reliable companies pursue DTC ads AND
b) [that], therefore, this data is expected
The lack of a comma before
therefore in the sentence is problematic if one appears after the transition. Furthermore, in the comma-less version, I would expect the phrase to read,
this data is therefore expected. Now, regarding the comma after
expected, that one does not need to appear there by any means. Sometimes when a phrase or subordinate clause is lengthy, you may see a comma after it that indicates a clear break and a transition back into the main clause. Is the subordinate clause here lengthy enough? Maybe, maybe not. If this were a Sentence Correction question, I would not expect to see the comma.
On the notion that a verb cannot follow a comma, I would argue against creating or adopting such a rule. A phrase or clause may interrupt the main clause ahead of the verb, sometimes for emphasis:
Mr. Jones forbade his students from texting in the classroom. He, however, felt it would be okay to do so himself while his students were taking an exam.I keep writing in my posts that people should stick to official questions for Verbal. The sentence you have asked about provides a compelling reason to that end.
- Andrew