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A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.

A ) A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.
B ) The development of a new cancer drug is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades because of its dependence on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience.
C) The development of a new cancer drug is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades and it depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience.
D) The development of a new cancer drug, dependent on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.
E) A new cancer drug, with its development dependent on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.






A ) A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades. Correct
B ,C,D ) Development is not going to be available... drug is going to be available.
E) development dependent on various scientific advances is a fact even for now.. It's not gonna exist only with the availability of drug
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A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.

A ) A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.--- Meaning is clear, drug is expected to available
B ) The development of a new cancer drug is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades because of its dependence on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience. --- As per this option development is expected to available but it is not intended meaning
C) The development of a new cancer drug isexpected to be available to general public in the next two decades and it depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience.--- As per this option development is expected to available but it is not intended meaning
D) The development of a new cancer drug, dependent on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.--- As per this option development is expected to available but it is not intended meaning
E) A new cancer drug, with its development dependent on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades. meaning changes

answer is A
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LoneSurvivor wrote:
A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.

A ) A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.
B ) The development of a new cancer drug is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades because of its dependence on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience.
C) The development of a new cancer drug is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades and it depends on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience.
D) The development of a new cancer drug, dependent on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.
E) A new cancer drug, with its development dependent on various scientific advances in molecular chemistry and neuroscience, is expected to be available to general public in the next two decades.


In B, C and E there is same Modifier Error. All these sentences say that "The development of a new cancer drug is expected to be available" whereas the correct expression is "The new cancer drug is expected to be available".

Between A & E, E uses unnecessary passive voice to say the same point which A says in an active and succinct manner.

So IMO A is the correct answer.


Thanks. Still confused about option E. How is there a modifier error here? Would really appreciate some elaboration here. Shivan21
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I thought, "whose" is used for a person. A drug isn't a person?
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Re: A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific [#permalink]
EducationAisle,

Can you highlight the errors in option E?

Not getting the ",with its development" part.

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krndatta wrote:
EducationAisle,

Can you highlight the errors in option E?

Not getting the ",with its development" part.

Thanks


Hello krndatta,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, the "with its development..." construction is less direct than the "whose development..." construction and could be interpreted to illogical imply that both the drug and its development is expected to be available to the general public.

We hope this helps.
All the best!
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Zake wrote:
I thought, "whose" is used for a person. A drug isn't a person?


Can experts answer to this good mans question, please :)
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Zake wrote:
I thought, "whose" is used for a person. A drug isn't a person?


Can experts answer to this good mans question, please :)


Hello Paagrio,

We hope this finds you well.

To understand the concept of using "Whose" to refer to humans and non-humans, you may want to watch the following video (~2 minutes):



All the best!
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Re: A new cancer drug, whose development depends on various scientific [#permalink]
Hi team

Can we really use whose for a thing when "whose' is being used as relative pronoun?
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Hi team

Can we really use whose for a thing when "whose' is being used as relative pronoun?

Yes, "whose" is the only possessive relative pronoun in the English language, and it can be used for humans and other things, both animate and inanimate.
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