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Even in this age of conservation, cooking ranges that consume fossil fuels are far more common than those that rely on magnetic resonance, producing heat more efficiently than natural gas.
(A) producing heat more efficiently than natural gas
(B) producing heat more efficiently than natural gas does
(C) which produce heat more efficiently than natural gas
(D) which produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does
(E) much more efficient at producing heat than natural gas
Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of the crucial part of this sentence is that cooking ranges that rely on magnetic resonance produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does, as a result.
Concepts tested here: Meaning + Modifiers + Comparisons• Comparisons can only be made between similar things.
• The introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “producing” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.
A: 1/ This answer choice incorrectly compares the action "producing heat" to the noun "natural gas"; remember, comparisons can only be made between similar things.
B: Correct.1/ This answer choice uses the phrase "producing heat more efficiently"; the use of the "comma + present participle ("verb+ing" - "producing in this case") conveys the intended meaning - that cooking ranges that rely on magnetic resonance produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does,
as a result of relying on magnetic resonance; remember, the introduction of the present participle ("verb+ing"- “producing” in this case) after comma generally leads to a cause-effect relationship.
2/ Option B correctly compares the action "producing heat" with the action "natural gas does (produce heat)".
C:1/ This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "which produce"; the use of the "which" phrase to modify "those that rely on magnetic resonance" incompletely implies that cooking ranges that rely on magnetic resonance produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does; the intended meaning is that cooking ranges that rely on magnetic resonance produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does,
as a result of relying on magnetic resonance.
2/ Option C incorrectly compares the action "produce heat" to the noun "natural gas"; remember, comparisons can only be made between similar things.
D:1/ This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "which produce"; the use of the "which" phrase to modify "those that rely on magnetic resonance" incompletely implies that cooking ranges that rely on magnetic resonance produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does; the intended meaning is that cooking ranges that rely on magnetic resonance produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does,
as a result of relying on magnetic resonance.
E:1/ This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "much more efficient..."; the use of this phrase to modify "those that rely on magnetic resonance" incompletely implies that cooking ranges that rely on magnetic resonance produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does; the intended meaning is that cooking ranges that rely on magnetic resonance produce heat more efficiently than natural gas does,
as a result of relying on magnetic resonance.
2/ Option E incorrectly compares the action "producing heat" to the noun "natural gas"; remember, comparisons can only be made between similar things.
Hence, B is the best answer choice.To understand the concept of "Comma Plus Present Participle for Cause-Effect Relationship" on GMAT, you may want to watch the following video (~2 minutes):
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Experts' Global Team