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IMO E In little more than a decade, Argentina has become

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In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world’s leading exporter of honey, with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going to the United States.

A. with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going --> half of which wrongly modifies for foreign markets
B. with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it that goes -->it does not clearly modify for any Noun. Besides, ungrammatical structure: "and almost half of it that goes ..."
C. with the sale to foreign markets of nearly 90,000 tons a year, with almost half of it going --> same as first error of B.
D. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it goes -->same error of misplaced modifier it
E. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half going --> best. A participle phrase - modifier: "selling nearly ... foreign markets" for the main clause. The prepositional phrase "with ...United States" modifying for 90,000 tons a year curtails the misplaced modifier "it" to make a more precise meaning

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gmatee wrote:
I'm still confused.
"selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half going"
Why we use "going" here? is that the reduced clause? i think this should be : selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half goes to the United States.
Is this sentence correct? : ....selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half of the 90,000 tons goes to the United State.


So, E is OA ?

with almost half goes to the United States is not correct because it will make up a clause incorrectly following after with

After with, we only use Noun phrase to make up a prepositional phrase or structure like: with + Noun + that + clause (S + V + O)
but: with + clause (S + V + O) is incorrect

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IMO E

In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world’s leading exporter of honey, with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going to the United States.

A. with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going --> half of which wrongly modifies for foreign markets
B. with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it that goes -->it does not clearly modify for any Noun. Besides, ungrammatical structure: "and almost half of it that goes ..."
C. with the sale to foreign markets of nearly 90,000 tons a year, with almost half of it going --> same as first error of B.
D. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it goes -->same error of misplaced modifier it
E. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half going --> best. A participle phrase - modifier: "selling nearly ... foreign markets" for the main clause. The prepositional phrase "with ...United States" modifying for 90,000 tons a year curtails the misplaced modifier "it" to make a more precise meaning


Though I agree D is incorrect its not because of "it".
"to foreign markets" is prepositional phrase and can not act as noun phrase for the latter part.
Hence it correctly refers to 90000 tons.
Even in E half "of it" is implicit.

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In little more than a decade, Argentina has become the world’s leading exporter of honey, with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going to the United States.

A. with nearly 90,000 tons a year sold to foreign markets, almost half of which going - wrong time of verb
B. with the sale of nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it that goes - wordy and wrong
C. with the sale to foreign markets of nearly 90,000 tons a year, with almost half of it going - repetition of 2 'with'
D. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, and almost half of it goes - not parallel, wrong cunstruction
E. selling nearly 90,000 tons a year to foreign markets, with almost half going - right and parallel; selling modifies Argentina, going parallel to selling

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