Last visit was: 19 May 2024, 17:01 It is currently 19 May 2024, 17:01
Close
GMAT Club Daily Prep
Thank you for using the timer - this advanced tool can estimate your performance and suggest more practice questions. We have subscribed you to Daily Prep Questions via email.

Customized
for You

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History

Track
Your Progress

every week, we’ll send you an estimated GMAT score based on your performance

Practice
Pays

we will pick new questions that match your level based on your Timer History
Not interested in getting valuable practice questions and articles delivered to your email? No problem, unsubscribe here.
Close
Request Expert Reply
Confirm Cancel
SORT BY:
Date
Tags:
Poor Quality,       
Show Tags
Hide Tags
Manager
Manager
Joined: 22 Nov 2016
Posts: 205
Own Kudos [?]: 268 [13]
Given Kudos: 50
Concentration: Leadership, Strategy
Send PM
Retired Moderator
Joined: 10 Oct 2016
Status:Long way to go!
Posts: 1143
Own Kudos [?]: 6183 [1]
Given Kudos: 65
Location: Viet Nam
Send PM
Intern
Intern
Joined: 25 Jan 2013
Posts: 30
Own Kudos [?]: 14 [0]
Given Kudos: 5909
Location: United States
Concentration: General Management, Entrepreneurship
Schools: Johnson '21
Send PM
Intern
Intern
Joined: 07 Feb 2016
Posts: 2
Own Kudos [?]: 5 [0]
Given Kudos: 11
Location: India
WE:Information Technology (Computer Software)
Send PM
Re: Primary schooling is almost universal, and today [#permalink]
vs224 wrote:
Please clarify the OA. As current answer meant 3 out of 4 children are enrolled in both pre and secondary school. Per me, children can be in either one of them, therefore chose D.


Yeah.. same question.. can someone please clarify?
Manager
Manager
Joined: 28 May 2017
Posts: 224
Own Kudos [?]: 733 [0]
Given Kudos: 12
Concentration: Finance, General Management
Send PM
Re: Primary schooling is almost universal, and today [#permalink]
Primary schooling is almost universal, today, three out of four children are enrolled in pre- and secondary school.

A) Primary schooling is almost universal, today, three out of four children are enrolled in pre- and secondary school. - 2 Independent clauses are connected without any connector, leading to Run-on. Hence Incorrect.
B) Three out of four children are enrolled in both pre- and secondary school and it is almost universal today. - What is the Antecedent of IT...? Antecedent of IT is "Primary Schooling", but this noun is nowhere present in the sentence. Hence Incorrect.
C) Today, primary schooling is almost universal, and three out of four children are enrolled in both pre- and secondary school. - This option changes the original intent a little bit, but Best option out of the rest.
D) Today, primary school is almost universal, and three out of four children enrolled are in it. - Alters the original intent altogether. Author is talking about PRIMARY SCHOOLING and not PRIMARY SCHOOL. Hence Incorrect.
E) Primary schooling is universal today, almost three out of four children are enrolled in pre- and secondary school. - 2 Independent clauses are connected without any connector, leading to Run-on. Hence Incorrect.
Manager
Manager
Joined: 28 May 2017
Posts: 224
Own Kudos [?]: 733 [0]
Given Kudos: 12
Concentration: Finance, General Management
Send PM
Re: Primary schooling is almost universal, and today [#permalink]
rachanaramesh wrote:
vs224 wrote:
Please clarify the OA. As current answer meant 3 out of 4 children are enrolled in both pre and secondary school. Per me, children can be in either one of them, therefore chose D.


Yeah.. same question.. can someone please clarify?


I agree with your logic. This option changes the original intent a tad bit.
Intern
Intern
Joined: 13 Mar 2018
Posts: 41
Own Kudos [?]: 15 [0]
Given Kudos: 8
Location: India
Concentration: Operations, General Management
GMAT 1: 720 Q50 V36
GPA: 4
WE:Operations (Consumer Products)
Send PM
Re: Primary schooling is almost universal, and today [#permalink]
all the choices except D, seem to imply that 3 out 4 children are enrolled in both the classes....
Therefore D, though that goes out of the line/ implied context of the sentence.
This way none of the choices seem correct.
Manhattan Prep Instructor
Joined: 22 Mar 2011
Posts: 2661
Own Kudos [?]: 7791 [0]
Given Kudos: 56
GMAT 2: 780  Q50  V50
Send PM
Re: Primary schooling is almost universal, and today [#permalink]
Expert Reply
Yeah, this one needs some repairs. I looked at the source Economist article, and it does indeed say "three out of four children are enrolled in both pre- and secondary school." This is not great, but I think the intended meaning is that 3/4 of kids end up enrolling in both preschool and secondary school, before and after their primary school experience. However, I don't think this would be acceptable on the GMAT. I don't even like "pre- and secondary," which is odd and over-casual. Basically, the Economist editors were asleep at the wheel on this one.

As for D, although we're allowed to "change the meaning" if the other versions make no sense, here we're just cutting a key concept out, and what remains makes little sense. "Three out of four students enrolled are in it"? In what? This seems to say that 3/4 of the students who are enrolled in primary school are actually in primary school. Hmm . . .
User avatar
Non-Human User
Joined: 01 Oct 2013
Posts: 17333
Own Kudos [?]: 851 [0]
Given Kudos: 0
Send PM
Re: Primary schooling is almost universal, and today [#permalink]
Hello from the GMAT Club VerbalBot!

Thanks to another GMAT Club member, I have just discovered this valuable topic, yet it had no discussion for over a year. I am now bumping it up - doing my job. I think you may find it valuable (esp those replies with Kudos).

Want to see all other topics I dig out? Follow me (click follow button on profile). You will receive a summary of all topics I bump in your profile area as well as via email.

This Question is Locked Due to Poor Quality
Hi there,
The question you've reached has been archived due to not meeting our community quality standards. No more replies are possible here.
Looking for better-quality questions? Check out the 'Similar Questions' block below for a list of similar but high-quality questions.
Want to join other relevant Problem Solving discussions? Visit our Sentence Correction (EA only) Forum for the most recent and top-quality discussions.
Thank you for understanding, and happy exploring!
GMAT Club Bot
Re: Primary schooling is almost universal, and today [#permalink]
Moderators:
GMAT Club Verbal Expert
6929 posts
GMAT Club Verbal Expert
238 posts