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Nice explanation by daagh .. Sentence 1 looks a bit aqward and wordy compared to sentence 2 which is concise and correct.
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Thanks daagh and MichaelS for the explanations.

There is one small clarification. Per Michael's post, "what" would actually stand for "the progress that" and not just "progress".

But i got the overall message.

To check for pronoun, replace it with its intended noun and see if the resultant sentence makes sense.

When the only difference between two choices is "what" and "other logical pronoun", choose the latter unless it sounds very awkward.

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