thelosthippie wrote:
The data being collected in the current geological survey are providing a strong warning for engineers as they consider the new dam project, but their greatest importance might lie in how they influence the upcoming decision by those same engineers on whether to retrofit 75 bridges in the survey zone.
This is a very good question. Those who could select the correct answer in the first attempt, take a bow!
While in our day-to-day life we use data as a singular noun, it is actually the plural of datum. However, some experts do consider it as a collective noun, so it may be treated as a singular as well. In case of this ambiguity, we need to seek support from the question stem itself.
Let us analyse the portion that is not underlined:
"...might lie in how they influence the upcoming decision by those same engineers on whether to retrofit 75 bridges in the survey zone."the antecedent of "those" is clearly engineers, as evident by the portion itself. We need to find out the antecedent of "they". The statement is "... how they influence the upcoming decision by those same engineers". Thus, "they does not refer to engineers. Clearly, then, it refers to "data". Thus, in this sentence, the noun "data" has been used as a plural, rather than a collective noun. The same usage must happen throughout the sentence.
Now let us look at the options
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(A) The data being collected in the current geological survey are providing a strong warning for engineers as they consider the new dam project, but their greatest importance
data - plural. Correct
"their" must have the same antecedent as "they" in the portion not underlined. We determined above that the antecedent of "they" is "data". So, again, data - "their" - plural. Correct. No other visible error. Good to keep for now.
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(B) The data being collected in the current geological survey provide a strong warning for engineers as they consider the new dam project, but its greatest importance
data - its -singular. Incorrect. Reject
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(C) The data collected in the current geological survey is providing a strong warning for engineers as they consider the new dam project, but their greatest importance
data - is providing - singular. Incorrect. Reject
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(D) The data collected in the current geological survey provides a strong warning for engineers in consideration of the new dam project, but its greatest importance
data - provides - singular. Incorrect. Reject
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(E) The data collected in the current geological survey provide a strong warning for engineers in consideration for the new dam project, but the greatest importance
data - provide. Plural. Correct.
Overall structure seems fine. However, there is one major issue:
it changes the intended meaning: As per the question stem, the data is still being collected. It is present continuous. But this option states that the work of data collection is already over. This error also exists in option (D) & (C), but was overlooked, since they carried clearer subject verb disagreement.
So, the only option with no error whatsoever is (A)
Please do let me know if my approach has any flaw; or if there is any verbal mistake in my explanation. I am going to write my GMAT on 22nd June 2021