OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
Quote:
Antibiotics not being invented until the twentieth century, many ancient cultures used specially selected mold and plant extracts in order to treat infections.
A)
[Although] Antibiotics
not being invented
B)
[Although]Antibiotics
had not been invented
C) While antibiotics
had not been invented
D) Although antibiotics
have not been invented
E) Although antibiotics were not invented
• Split #1: Contrast is requiredThe two clauses in this sentence present opposing ideas, so we need a contrast word or transition phrase such as
although or
while.
On the one hand, antibiotics were not formally invented until the twentieth century.
On the other hand, ancient cultures used types of mold to treat infections, a remedy that mimics antibiotics.
Options A and B do not contain any contrast word.
Eliminate A and B
• Split #2: verbsOption C is incorrect because the past perfect [had + past participle (verbED)], often called "the past of the past," is used to refer to the
earlier of two events that occurred in the past.
The twentieth century, though, obviously came after an earlier period ("ancient cultures").
(Option B, already eliminated, has this same verb problem.)
Option D is incorrect because the present perfect (have + past participle) is used to refer to an action
that is continuing into the present.
The invention of antibiotics was a one-time occurrence that took place in the past, not an ongoing event.
(Option A's use of
being is problematic, but it's easier to eliminate (A) on that basis of poor logical connection between clauses. If you can't decide about "being," hold the option until you read option C and realize that a contrast word is missing from option A.)
The correct answer is E.Option E
-- correctly uses the transition
although to signal the contrasting relationship between the clauses and
-- uses the simple past
were to indicate a finished action in the past.
• NotesPast perfectBy its very nature, the use of past perfect indicates
time sequence.When two events happened in the past and one preceded the other, often we use "past perfect" [had verbED] for the earlier-in-time event.
In order to use past perfect, at least one event must be rendered in simple past tense or marked by a time stamp that identifies it as the later-in-time event.
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