OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
In a work that is to cinema what The Wealth of Nations is to economics, screenwriter David Mamet provides several nuggets of wisdom on how to direct a film and is a mandatory read for anyone connected to the movie industry. • Idioms that are easy to mix up
The correct idiomatic expressions are either
(1)
the same to X as to Y or
(2)
something is to X what something else is to Y.
Be careful not to mix up these two expressions.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) In a work that is to cinema what
The Wealth of Nations is to economics,
screenwriter David Mamet provides several nuggets of wisdom on how to direct a film and
is a mandatory read for anyone connected to the movie industry.
• Nonsensical
→ David Mamet himself is not a mandatory read.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) In a work that is
the same to cinema
what The Wealth of Nations is to economics, screenwriter David Mamet provides several nuggets of wisdom on how to direct a film,
which is a mandatory read for anyone connected to the movie industry.
• mixed up and garbled idioms
→
correct:
Mamet's work is the same to cinema as The Wealth of Nations is to economics.→
correct:
Mamet's work is to cinema what The Wealth of Nations is to economics.→
wrong:
Mamet's work is the same to cinema what The Wealth of Nations is to economics.This option follows the third pattern. Wrong. The idioms are cobbled together incorrectly.
• misplaced modifier: to what does
which is a mandatory read refer?
→ presumably the thing that is a mandatory read is the "work," but the placement of that which-clause is too far from its noun
→ the Modifier "Touch" Rule states that noun modifiers must be as close as possible to the nouns they modify. The rule has exceptions.
A noun modifier can be fairly far away from its noun—but not this far.
The target of the which-clause is the third word in the sentence ("work").
The word
which can often "reach back over" other essential modifiers to get to its noun, but in this case the
which must jump back over three verbs. Not okay.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) Screenwriter
David Mamet, in
a work for cinema what The Wealth of Nations is for economics, provides several nuggets of wisdom on directing a film and
is a mandatory read for anyone connected to the movie industry.
• Nonsensical
→ David Mamet himself is not a mandatory read.
• garbled idiom
→ The construction of
a work for cinema what [i]The Wealth of Nations is for economics[/i] botches
something is to X what something else is to YELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) In a work that is a mandatory read for anyone connected to the movie industry and that is to cinema what
The Wealth of Nations is to economics, screenwriter David Mamet
who provides several nuggets of wisdom on how to direct a film.
• The case of the missing verb
No main verb exists; this would-be sentence is a fragment.
The word
who "eats up" the only available verb,
provides.
Sentences that contain relative clauses (which-, that-, or who-clauses) will contain at least two verbs: one for the main subject and one for the relative pronoun.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) In a work that is to cinema what
The Wealth of Nations is to economics, screenwriter David Mamet provides several nuggets of wisdom on how to direct a film, making it a mandatory read for anyone connected to the movie industry.
• Bingo. No errors
• The word
making creates a phrase that modifies the entire previous clause, which starts at "In a work . . ."
• "it" refers to "a work."
→ This usage does
not constitute pronoun ambiguity.
Only one noun in this sentence logically qualifies as the antecedent of the pronoun
it.
The word
it is tucked into a phrase that modifies the whole previous clause, so we look at that whole clause to see whether more than one noun could logically be a mandatory read.
Only one noun matches "it" and makes logical sense.
KEEP
The answer is E.AkashM , you asked:
Quote:
generis, is this usage "In a work that is the same to cinema" wrong except on count of conciseness maybe?
Good question.
Answer: I don't think so.
In fact, if a person were not familiar with the idiom, the addition of "the same" might create better "word sense."
The idiom at play is weird (and tested!): Something literally IS to ABC what something else IS to XYZ.
Again, I think that if you had never heard of the idiom, seeing "the same" in that idiom would make it seem more sensible.
If you knew the idiom, then your first thought would be that the construction is not idiomatic rather than that it lacks concision.
Some idioms are not concise.
Most of the time, answer choices that contain idiom errors will also contain another error.
We can eliminate option B on other grounds. The which-clause is too far from its noun.
I've been playing catch-up, as I mentioned in another post, so I'll get to March 18 soon.
These answers range from good to excellent.
To some of you: Please, explain yourselves. Labeling is not explanation.
I won't dock kudos this time, but I will do so next time.
David Mamet is a formidable talent—Pulitzer Prize winning playwright, screenwriter, director, and nonfiction author—albeit sometimes uneven.
This sentence refers to his 1991 book,
On Directing Film.Stay safe, everyone.