OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
Quote:
In the initial stages of learning a new language we learn
more through
listening and attempting to copy speech patterns and not through reading grammar books.A) and attempting to copy speech patterns
and not through reading grammar books.
B) and attempting to copy speech patterns than through reading grammar books.
C) and
attempts to copy speech patterns than through reading grammar books.
D) and attempting to copy speech patterns
rather than through reading grammar books.
E) and attempting to copy speech patterns
instead of through reading grammar books.
POE (process of elimination: find and eliminate the four worst answers• Split #1: MORE . . . THAN In English, when two things are compared and you see a comparative word or phrase such as
more, less, taller, shorter, much taller, more beautiful, and so on,
immediately look for the word
than.
more . . . thanless . . . thanmore beautiful . . . thanFurthermore, there is no such thing as
More X and Y . . . rather than Z.
("Rather than" can be used in many other contexts, but not one such as this in which the word
more is not yet paired with a plain
than.)
The specific iteration of this idiom in this sentence is
More through X and Y than through Z.Or even more specifically,
MORE through doing X and Y . . . THAN through doing Z.Eliminate answers A ("and not"), D ("rather than"), and E ("instead of")
• Split #2 -- ParallelismOptions B and C remain.
Option B:
. . . and attempting to copy speech patterns . . .Option C:
. . . and attempts to copy speech patterns . . .Find the parallelism marker,
and.
The right hand side (RHS) should match the left hand side (LHS).
To the left of
and we see
listening.
We need a word parallel to the gerund (verbING),
listening.
You might be doubtful. Sometimes
and joins verb phrases.
Perhaps this
and refers to
learn, which is the main verb.
No.
Look at the end of the sentence, which is identical in the remaining options.
That end part states,
. . . than through reading grammar books."The word
and refers to
listening.
Now we have two gerunds (verbING words):
listening and
reading.
Which answer maintains the parallelism better than the other?
B) gives us
listening . . .attempting . . . readingC) gives us
listening . . . attempts . . . reading→ Option B uses the gerund (verbING) word
attempting, which is parallel to
listening and to
reading.
→ Option C uses the noun
attempts, which is a "regular" abstract noun and not really parallel to
listening or to
reading.
(They are all nouns, but typically we do not pair a "regular" noun with a gerund (verbING); it is better to pair a gerund with another gerund.)
Eliminate C.
The correct answer is B.COMMENTSritzu , welcome to SC Butler.
I am always happy to have aspirants join in. (I like yay!, too. It's cheery.

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I want you all to succeed on this test, and I know of no better way to learn something than to post about and thus teach it.
So if you are an aspirant, take me up on my standing offer to post.
And don't worry about making mistakes.
Show me a person who makes few mistakes and I will show you a person who learns very little.
These explanations range from good to excellent.
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