OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
Quote:
Fernande Olivier was an artist
who Picasso met in 1904 during the Rose Period, which is characterized by images of acrobats, harlequins, and other circus people.
A)
who Picasso met in 1904 during the Rose Period, which is characterized by images of acrobats, harlequins, and other circus people
B) whom Picasso met in 1904 during the Rose Period, which is characterized by images of harlequins,
acrobatic, and other circus people
C) whom Picasso met in 1904 during the Rose Period, which is characterized by images of acrobats, harlequins, and other circus people
D) whom Picasso met in 1904 during the Rose Period, which is characterized by images of acrobats, harlequins, and
shows other circus people
E)
who, in 1904, Picasso met during the Rose Period, which is characterized by images of acrobats, harlequins, and other circus people
Relative pronouns are an important area of GMAT Sentence Correction.
The most important ones on the GMAT are
who, which, that, whose and
whom.
Split #1: WHO vs. WHOMWhich word is correct in this sentence,
who or
whom?
Relative pronouns on the GMAT describe the noun or noun phrase immediately before them, in this case "artist."
So now ask yourself: is "artist" the subject (the "doer" of the action) or the object (the "receiver" of the action) of the relative clause?
If
artist is the subject, the doer, use
who.
If
artist is the object, the receiver, use
whom.
The relative clause is
who Picasso met in 1904 during the Rose Period.
Looking at the verb is the easiest way to determine whether something is the subject or the object of a relative clause.
In this case, the verb is "met."
Who did the meeting? Picasso.
Thus, Picasso is the subject of the relative clause.
(Careful. Often the relative pronoun
who is the "subject" of the relative clause, this way:
Picasso, who blazed a trail in twentieth century art, painted Guernica, a searing representation of the Spanish Civil War. Because we are dealing with a modifier in that sentence, the subject of the who-clause is
who, referring to Picasso, whereas in our case, Picasso himself is the actor in a relative clause that does not directly modify Picasso.)
On the other hand, who was met? Who received the action of being met?
The
artist. Therefore, the artist is the
object of the relative clause.
We must use
whom in this instance.
Change the order to S-V-O (subject-verb-object).
Picasso met the artist.
Picasso met
he?
Picasso met hiM.
If you need
him, her, or
them, use
whom.
(Test "him" in all of those cases. If
him works, think: "Him" has an M on the end. So does "whom." Use
whom.)
Eliminate A and E, both of which improperly use
who to refer to the artist receiving the action of being met by Picasso.
Split #2: ParallelismItems in a list must be parallel.
That is, they must be the same part of speech and play the same logical function in the sentence.
Nouns go with nouns.
Verbs go with verbs.
Verbals go with verbals.
And so on.
The list in this sentence describes
the Rose Period, which is characterized by images of 1) acrobats, 2) [of] harlequins, and 3) [of] other circus people[/u].
Option B changes
acrobats incorrectly to the adjective
acrobatic. We do not have three parallel nouns.
Option D unnecessarily and incorrectly adds another verb:
shows. Again, we do not have three parallel nouns.
Eliminate B and D.
The answer is C.COMMENTSBelieve it or not, native speakers often have a harder time with
whom than do non-native speakers, because our ears hear the mistaken
who spoken too often.
(Don't get me started on "Me and Vivek are going to the movies," a sentence whose structure now seems to be the default and is designed to drive me crazy.
Me doesn't do anything. Ever.)
Don't rely on dictionary usage notes for the GMAT.
I just read usage notes in three major dictionaries (Oxford online included).
Two of three assert that the use of
whom is in rapid decline except in very formal circumstances.
Hooey. Plenty of "regular" people still use
whom.More to the point, GMAC expects you to know how to use
whom.beeblebrox , I am bumping you to Best Community reply.