OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
THE PROMPTQuote:
Although the number of romance novels published by Harlequin Enterprises in 2002
amounts to a sum greater than 50 percent of all the romance titles published that year, the company's sales were still down because of high growth in other genres of women's fiction.
• MEANING?Although Harlequin Enterprises published more than half of all the romance novels in 2002 [and thus we would expect that company's sales to have been high], Harlequin's sales were nonetheless down because of high growth in sales of other kinds of women's fiction books. • ISSUE: VERB TENSEWhen verb tenses differ in the answer choices, you have almost certainly found a "split" upon whose basis you can eliminate a couple or more answer choices, so immediately check the prompt.
In particular,
check the non-underlined portion for a verb whose tense will give you information about the different verb tenses in the answer choices.
Under pressure, it is easy to forget to read, let alone parse, the non-underlined portion of the sentence.
In this question, you will see that "the company's sales
were still down . . ." That
were is simple past tense.
In addition, look for clues that might not be registering in your brain: in this sentence, the year 2002—two decades ago—lets you know that we are dealing with some kind of past tense.
• ISSUE: QUANTIFIERS IN COMPARISONSTwo details.
First, a
sum is itself a number (as is, say, "population") and thus takes
greater than, not
more than.A
sum and many other "number" nouns can also be used comparatively with the word
over:-- The new city park covers just over 100 acres.
-- Over 90 percent of Americans like ice cream.
You can read example sentences in Oxford online dictionary
here. (Scroll down to 3: "Higher than or more than (a specified number or quantity)," then click on the bubble with a + sign titled "more example sentences.")
Second, the verb
to amount [to] already implies the noun "sum."
That is, the verb
amount to means "to come to be (the total) when added together."
→
Losses amounted to over 10 million dollars. See
here.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A)
amounts to a
sum greater than
• verb tense error
→ The present tense verb
amounts is incorrect.
The nonunderlined portion states that "sales
were down."
The year at issue is 2002: twenty years ago.
We need simple past tense.
• redundancy
→ As I noted above (see the definition), the verb
amount to already implies
sum.
Eliminate A
Quote:
B)
amounts to greater than
• verb tense error
→ Same problem as that in option A; the sentence does not warrant a present tense verb.
Eliminate B
Quote:
• I do not see any errors
• The simple past tense verb "amounted to" is correct.
• In usage terms, it is perfectly acceptable to say that romance book sales "amounted to over half of all sales."
Other verbs such as "to cost" and "to total" are similar.
--
The art supplies cost over $1,000.KEEP
Quote:
D) amounted to
larger than
• quantifier error: we do not say "larger than 50 percent."
→
larger almost always refers to size.
An aardvark is larger than an ant.→ Sometimes we can use
larger with "pure numbers."
The ratio of a circle's circumference to its diameter is π, which is slightly larger than 3.→ But real world numbers (temperatures, percentages, sums)
never take larger.
Wrong: The average temperature in the tropics is
larger than that in the Arctic.
Eliminate D
Quote:
E)
amounted to a
sum greater than
• redundancy: as in option A, "amounted to" already implies a sum.
Eliminate E
The best answer is C.