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For the argument essay, the main point is your are trying to make in the introduction is unclear. It can use some re-wording. E.g. The reasoning is flawed as the author assumes that low priced food cannot be nutritious.

Also, I don't get the point of the second paragraph. What do you mean by "duplicate items"?

The main point, in my opinion, is the fact that there is no evidence to support the relation between lack of government control and increase in the cases of diabetes. The arguments that author provides are brittle at best. The would fall flat under very little scrutiny. E.g. How would government's requiring manufacturers to include nutrition in food would ensure people would eat that food? Maybe people don't want to eat that food, maybe people like eating junk food. Also, there no mention related to affordability of food. The argument never talks about that people are not choosing food due to costs. Also, what category of people are the ones suffering most from diabetes? It those people can already afford good food but choose not to, this solution wouldn't really do anything and so on.

I would rate this essay between 3-4.

Hope this was helpful.

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