The following appeared in a newspaper editorial.
As violence in movies increases, so do crime rates in our cities. To combat this problem we must establish a board to censor certain movies or we must limit admission to persons over 21 years of age. Apparently our legislators are not concerned about this issue since a bill calling for such actions recently failed to receive a majority vote. Analysis :
The argument is weak for several underlying reasons. For instance, the very beginning of the argument is a vague statement without any proof whatsoever. There is also a case being made to screen the violent movies only to people aged 21 or higher, which makes it sound like all the crime in our society are committed by under aged folks, which clearly is wrong.
The argument assumes that violence in movies and crime rates in cities are directly proportional. Firstly, crime has been a part of our social culture long before movies came into the picture. There is also no data or statistical analysis to support the statement being made. We really can not measure violence as a quantity to know when it increases or decreases. Who is to decide what is the permissible amount of violence in a movie ? Person X may find a movie having barely 10 minutes of violence to be extreme while there may be another Person Y who enjoys watching movies with a certain amount of violence in it. It is also the responsibility of civilized citizens to learn from the good things that are shown in movies rather than focus on the violence. The argument would be better served had we been provided with some sort of data from which this conclusion has been drawn.
Moving on to the next part of the argument, there is a suggestion made that admissions to violent movies should be limited to people over 21 years of age. Although one would argue that if children are exposed to movies with extremely violent content they may be influenced by it, he must also realize that most crimes in the world are committed by people aged 21 or above. Hence, just limiting people of a certain age would not really cause an overall effect in the reduction of crime rate. Rather a prelude could be shown before such movies educating all the movie goers, irrespective of their age, about the downsides of violence.
It has also been mentioned that legislators are not concerned about this issue because a bill failed to receive majority vote. It simply can not be concluded that just because a bill fails it means that the legislators are not concerned. There are a number of criteria that a bill must fit into before it can be passed in the legislation. It is quite possible that some of these criteria were not met. More light could have been thrown on what the actual content of the bill was, rather than just blaming the legislators for not passing it.
Because the argument does not hold sufficient strength on several issues it can be deemed weak and insufficient. If it addressed some of the alternate solutions mentioned above, it would be better served in meeting it's objective.