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I choose C.

a. Americans admired Alexander Graham Bell and photographed him
- incorrect because "like other engineers and inventors" does not correctly modify "americans"

b. Americans admired Alexander Graham Bell and he was photographed
- same as A

c. Alexander Graham Bell was admired by Americans and was photographed
- correct parallel tense

d. Alexander Graham Bell won admiration and Americans photographed him
- won admiration? doesn't sound like what the sentence is meant to say

e. Americans who admired Alexander Graham Bell and photographed him
- same as A
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OK...I chose C just like all of you, but the Peterson online test, where I got this question from, says the OA is D. This is their explanation:

"The original uses a dangling modifier: it appears to say that Americans were like other engineers and inventors. (B) and (E) are incorrect because they do not place the subject Alexander Graham Bell closer to the modifying clause. (C) is incorrect because it corrects the original problem but uses the passive voice."

I liked what you all had to say, and I would like to believe that C is the correct answer. Any comments?
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III JUUUSSTTT DOOONN'TTT GEEETTTT IIIIIT!

I am so confused between recognizing what's passive and what's not. Is there a passive guru out there that can show me a light at the end of the tunnel?

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OK...I chose C just like all of you, but the Peterson online test, where I got this question from, says the OA is D. This is their explanation:

"The original uses a dangling modifier: it appears to say that Americans were like other engineers and inventors. (B) and (E) are incorrect because they do not place the subject Alexander Graham Bell closer to the modifying clause. (C) is incorrect because it corrects the original problem but uses the passive voice."

I liked what you all had to say, and I would like to believe that C is the correct answer. Any comments?


D is wrong...

D is a run-on sentence.

D is joing 2 Independent clauses with and. There is no comma or semicolon.
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riteshgupta1, you are absolutely correct. I never noticed that when I was reviewing my test. D is definitly a run-on sentence. Also, their is no rule to say that passive voice is absolutly incorrect (as in choice C). There are instances when passive voice can be used correctly. In the end I don't think I'll beat myself up over missing this question.
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Knowing my luck, this will show up on the test. Hardy har har.

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riteshgupta1, you are absolutely correct. I never noticed that when I was reviewing my test. D is definitly a run-on sentence. Also, their is no rule to say that passive voice is absolutly incorrect (as in choice C). There are instances when passive voice can be used correctly. In the end I don't think I'll beat myself up over missing this question.
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For Passive vs. Active (Good to know, although I don't think GMAT cares too much about it)

For Passive, the order of the sentence components goes object, verb subject. For active it is subject, verb, object.

Active: I won the race. Subject-verb-object
Passive: The race was won by me. Object-verb-subject

The subject is the thing doing the verb. The object is the thing that's having the verb done to it. Subjects are optional in the passive voice. Objects are optional in the Active.

The race was won. Passive complete sentence w/no true subject
I won. Active complete sentence with no object.
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I vote for C too!
But just wondering, its gonna be a mess if OAs were to use such logic on the real GMAT!



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