Bunuel
Performing in front of a crowd for the first time,
Mike’s voice was barely audible above the screeching din of loudspeaker feedback.(A) Mike’s voice was barely audible above the screeching din of loudspeaker feedback.
(B) Mike had a hard time making his voice audible over the screeching din of loudspeaker feedback.
(C) Mike’s voice was barely audible over the screeching din of loudspeaker feedback.
(D) the screeching din of loudspeaker feedback made it impossible to hear Mike’s voice
(E) Mike had a voice that was audibly above the screeching din of feedback from the loudspeaker.
Veritas Prep Official Explanation
(A) The sentence as written has a misplaced modifier – whenever a sentence begins with a participial phrase, in this case “Performing in front of a crowd for the first time,’ the modified subject should come immediately after the comma. Here, it sounds as though ‘Mike’s voice’ is performing in front of a crowd
(B) Correct. The participial phrase ‘performing in front of a crowd for the first time’ correctly modifies Mike.
(C) Again, it sounds as though Mike’s voice is performing in front of a crowd for the first time.
(D) Here it sounds as though ‘the screeching din’ is performing, which is nonsensical.
(E) The phrase “Mike had a voice that was audibly above’ is wordy and awkward. Additionally, “Mike had a voice” is illogical; he still has the same voice, so a past tense “had” doesn’t quite make logical sense.