A recently concluded study of students appearing for the GMAT has revealed that
the more practice tests these students took, the more was their likelihood of getting a 700 plus score.
(A) the more practice tests these students took,
the more
(B)
the more the number of practice tests these students took,
the more(C) the
higher practice tests these students took, the greater
(D) the
greater practice tests these students took,
the more(E) the more practice tests these students took, the greater
No error#1
When talking about
uncountable nouns; such as time, coffee, rice, milk, and love; you would need to use
more than and less than, also If you’re talking about
countable nouns, like pencils, cars, movies, and games, you would use
more than and fewer than to make comparisons of quantity.
#2
The
likelihood is a count noun and greater is used for it not more. As the second part of the structure refers to 'likelihood', we need 'greater'. 'greater' is used when a noun is a number. For example percentage, rate, likelihood, distance, and population.