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A) An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination ; redundancy issue ; vaccinated , vaccination
B) An important reason to be vaccinated is because it ; pronoun referent error 'it' , where it can refer to reason or be vaccinated
D ) An important reason why being vaccinated is important is that it ; same issue as C

E) An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination ; same issue as A

C) Vaccination is important because it ; correct option

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An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination prevents the spread of infectious diseases, such as cholera, typhoid, and typhus, which are prevalent in areas of the world that lack proper sanitation.


A) An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination

B) An important reason to be vaccinated is because it

C) Vaccination is important because it

D) An important reason why being vaccinated is important is that it

E) An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination
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My answer is (C). It took me 53 seconds.

The compelling reason to pick (C) is its clarity and brevity. Other versions basically convey the same idea.

The construction "The reason is because" has been upsetting pedants for about four generations now. (Read more at https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions ... -redundant.) (AB) uses such redundant construct.

How about "reason why", as used in (D)? We can argue that "why" is also redundant". (Read more at https://english.stackexchange.com/quest ... reason-why)

In (E), "An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination" = "vaccination is important because it". (C) is shorter. Shorter is better.

But don't you think the intention of statement is different in C. Option C seems to be a generic statement whereas the question promotes the idea/ reason of getting vaccinated by giving a logic that vaccination prevents the spread.

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I feel the answer should be E
In (A) because is used incorrectly
In (B) it's not clear what 'it' refers to
In (C) the meaning changes
In (D) it's wordy
In (E) it has no error

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An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination prevents the spread of infectious diseases, such as cholera, typhoid, and typhus, which are prevalent in areas of the world that lack proper sanitation.


A) An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination
'reason' and 'because' brings in redudancy therefore out

B) An important reason to be vaccinated is because it
Similar reasoning as A

C) Vaccination is important because it
Clear concise noerrors therefore our answer

D) An important reason why being vaccinated is important is that it
'being' is a huge red fag and doesn't fails to live upto the expectation therefore out

E) An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination
C better conveys the meaning

THerefore IMO C
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An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination prevents the spread of infectious diseases, such as cholera, typhoid, and typhus, which are prevalent in areas of the world that lack proper sanitation.

A) An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination

B) An important reason to be vaccinated is because it

C) Vaccination is important because it

D) An important reason why being vaccinated is important is that it

E) An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination

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My answer is (C).

The compelling reason to pick (C) is its clarity and brevity. Other versions basically convey the same idea.

The construction "The reason is because" has been upsetting pedants for about four generations now. (Read more at https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions ... -redundant.) (AB) uses such redundant construct.

How about "reason why", as used in (D)? We can argue that "why" is also redundant". (Read more at https://english.stackexchange.com/quest ... reason-why)

In (E), "An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination" = "vaccination is important because it". (C) is shorter. Shorter is better.

But don't you think the intention of statement is different in C. Option C seems to be a generic statement whereas the question promotes the idea/ reason of getting vaccinated by giving a logic that vaccination prevents the spread.

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I can sort of understand what you are trying to convey. Your point is subtle. (You may also have seen a different, incorrect version of this question and its discussion.)

On the other hand, you point out that the sentence "promotes the idea [behind] /reason [for] getting vaccinated by giving a logic that vaccination prevents the spread [of disease]."
The word "because," in option C, does exactly what you want it to do.
Because means "for the reason that." (See Oxford online dictionary, here.)

Many aspirants, including plenty of native speakers, gloss over (do not think about) the meaning of "because"—and, for that matter, over the words "reason" and "why."
Many people frequently and incorrectly use "reason why," for example. A reason is a why. The correct usage is a reason that.
Nor do most people understand that "because" is a powerfully inclusive causal word, all by itself.
Because is efficient.

Option C is the best choice.

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In a different version of this question (which has a few mistakes that I fixed), the prompt states, "An important reason to be vaccinated would be that vaccination prevents the spread of infectious diseases, such as cholera, typhoid, and typhus, that are prevalent in areas of the world that lack proper sanitation."
One answer choice in that version is similar to option C in this one.

In that case, you might argue that it is one thing to speculate about an important reason to do XYZ but quite another thing to assert an important reason to do XYZ. Option A does not determine intended meaning. Nonetheless, I would agree with you enough to change the prompt. And so I did. :)
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An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination prevents the spread of infectious diseases, such as cholera, typhoid, and typhus, which are prevalent in areas of the world that lack proper sanitation.


A) An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination

B) An important reason to be vaccinated is because it

C) Vaccination is important because it

D) An important reason why being vaccinated is important is that it

E) An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination


A & E Reason. B - it prevents what? Reason wrong. D- Being - avoidable therefore C short & sweet like sugar
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An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination prevents the spread of infectious diseases, such as cholera, typhoid, and typhus, which are prevalent in areas of the world that lack proper sanitation.


A) An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination

B) An important reason to be vaccinated is because it

C) Vaccination is important because it

D) An important reason why being vaccinated is important is that it

E) An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination

• OVERVIEW: redundancy

On the GMAT and in good writing generally, "the reason is" and "because" are redundant.
GMAC prefers concision. The reason is and because repeat the same idea.

The reason tells us why something happened.
Because also tells us why something happened.
-- The reason already announces that we are about to hear a causal explanation. Because indicates the same idea.
-- This site, here discusses the construction at issue. Essentially we are saying that "the reason is the reason.”
-- In speech, native speakers frequently use "the reason . . is because." They also use "the reason why." Both usages are redundant.
-- GMAC follows the typical rule for formal writing: because and the reason is are redundant, and concision is important.

• Split #1: An important reason . . . . is because = redundant

The word because means "for the reason that."
See Oxford online dictionary, here.

The correct usage is "An important reason to do XYZ is that" [it prevents the spread of disease].

GMAC tests this redundant and thus incorrect usage.
In fact, this phrasing and "reason why" are among the very few redundancies that prompt me to eliminate an answer on the first pass. (Otherwise, I leave redundancy until the end of analysis.)
Options A and B both deploy the incorrect phrasing.
Eliminate A and B.

• Split #2: an important reason . . . . is why = redundant

A reason is a "why."
This phrasing, too, is redundant, and it too is tested by GMAC.
Option D uses a reason why.
Eliminate D

• Split #3: Concision really is a thing.
Options C and E are both grammatical.
Option E is unnecessarily long.
Use concision at the end of analysis, as we are doing in this case.
Most of the time, if you can say the same thing in fewer words, you should do so or pick the answer that does so.
Eliminate option E.

The best answer is C.


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We are glad to have you.
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(If I've missed you, PM me. I try hard to track on names, but invariably I miss a few new people.)

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Don't worry about whether someone else has posted. Just go ahead. We learn better when we teach, I promise.

Keep up the good work, everyone.


I don't know take of GMAT on this. But I have seen at least one question which uses ''reason why'' in correct answer. For example, look at below question that I did yesterday. I then amended by SC notes stating ''usage of ''reason why'' is not necessarily wrong on GMAT, look for other definite errors for elimination.''

https://gmatclub.com/forum/people-contr ... 87439.html

Can you please clarify on this, is there any official take of GMAT on this?

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Quote:
An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination prevents the spread of infectious diseases, such as cholera, typhoid, and typhus, which are prevalent in areas of the world that lack proper sanitation.


A) An important reason to be vaccinated is because vaccination

B) An important reason to be vaccinated is because it

C) Vaccination is important because it

D) An important reason why being vaccinated is important is that it

E) An important reason to be vaccinated is that vaccination

• OVERVIEW: redundancy

On the GMAT and in good writing generally, "the reason is" and "because" are redundant.
GMAC prefers concision. The reason is and because repeat the same idea.

The reason tells us why something happened.
Because also tells us why something happened.
-- The reason already announces that we are about to hear a causal explanation. Because indicates the same idea.
-- This site, here discusses the construction at issue. Essentially we are saying that "the reason is the reason.”
-- In speech, native speakers frequently use "the reason . . is because." They also use "the reason why." Both usages are redundant.
-- GMAC follows the typical rule for formal writing: because and the reason is are redundant, and concision is important.

• Split #1: An important reason . . . . is because = redundant

The word because means "for the reason that."
See Oxford online dictionary, here.

The correct usage is "An important reason to do XYZ is that" [it prevents the spread of disease].

GMAC tests this redundant and thus incorrect usage.
In fact, this phrasing and "reason why" are among the very few redundancies that prompt me to eliminate an answer on the first pass. (Otherwise, I leave redundancy until the end of analysis.)
Options A and B both deploy the incorrect phrasing.
Eliminate A and B.

• Split #2: an important reason . . . . is why = redundant

A reason is a "why."
This phrasing, too, is redundant, and it too is tested by GMAC.
Option D uses a reason why.
Eliminate D

• Split #3: Concision really is a thing.
Options C and E are both grammatical.
Option E is unnecessarily long.
Use concision at the end of analysis, as we are doing in this case.
Most of the time, if you can say the same thing in fewer words, you should do so or pick the answer that does so.
Eliminate option E.

The best answer is C.


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Gauravji21 and aditigupta1208 , welcome to SC Butler.
We are glad to have you.
All first-time posters on my Butler threads automatically get kudos on their first post.
(If I've missed you, PM me. I try hard to track on names, but invariably I miss a few new people.)

All aspirants have a standing invitation to post on Butler.
Don't worry about whether someone else has posted. Just go ahead. We learn better when we teach, I promise.

Keep up the good work, everyone.


I don't know take of GMAT on this. But I have seen at least one question which uses ''reason why'' in correct answer. For example, look at below question that I did yesterday. I then amended by SC notes stating ''usage of ''reason why'' is not necessarily wrong on GMAT, look for other definite errors for elimination.''

https://gmatclub.com/forum/people-contr ... 87439.html

Can you please clarify on this, is there any official take of GMAT on this?

Thank You
Vighnesh

Thank You
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Hello VIGHNESHKAMATH,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, "reason why" is a redundant phrase, but it is not incorrect; remember, redundancy is not a deal-breaker on GMAT; and answer choice can have redundancies and still be correct.

We hope this helps.
All the best!
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