Hi
Marger,
Thank you for your post and for sharing your profile. Also, congratulations on a fantastic GMAT score!
As to your application to HBS and M7s, some areas require addressing, but overall you are a strong candidate. Being a white male in a finance-related job requires that you pay close attention to all components of your application, and present your case with a voice that differentiates you from your peers with similar demographics, particularly so because your post-MBA goal is MBB. Below are a few comments on the various sections of your profile:
Academics: While your undergraduate score might not have been as strong as you would like it to be, it is easily offset by your excellent performance in your Master's program, GMAT, and CFA charter-holder status. An optional essay outlining the academic growth since undergraduate would quell any concerns the adcom might have in this regard.
Professional experience: While you mention having four years of work experience in FP&A, you do not go into details about your role and contributions. The job title is second (or even 3rd) to the level of engagement and leadership you have demonstrated in the time you have been at your current firm (or any other firms since graduation). It would be beneficial in our evaluation if you can give further detail, especially as it relates to your transition to MBB.
Community Engagement/ECs: this area might need further discussion as well. How long have you been in the US? I would like to learn more about your involvement in your firm's charitable endeavors. The arbitrage betting partnership is a delicate topic and requires a thorough discussion.
I welcome the opportunity to learn more about your background and experiences and help you present your best application for the M7s. When ready, please
reach out.
HBS,
Wharton,
Booth,
Columbia, and
Kellogg have already released their application deadlines, and some have also released their essay questions.
Good luck!
Marger wrote:
Male 28 White European
Education
GMAT 780
Undergrad GPA: Top national European university, usually ranked in the top 100 globally. I am not sure about converting my GPA but it wasn't great maybe around 3.3ish. I hope that my story will be good for having a poor GPA, I was young and convinced myself that I was going to play professional rugby, since then I had high GPA in my masters and I also have high GMAT as well as getting my CFA first time for all the exams.
Masters : Masters in Finance at a top 20 US B-school GPA 3.8
CFA certified
Work Exp
4 years is working in FP&A for an F100 company all other members of my team are MBA's from top20ish programs (Ross, Booth, McCombs, Mendoza etc).
Internships with boutique private equity firm and General Electric
Extra Curricular
Played collegiate level rugby
Involved in coaching youth and women's sports. Head coach of High School cricket team
Still play sport and do crossfit
Founded an arbitrage betting partnership in college that turned an original 1k investement into 100k in two years (This one I am unsure about, it is a good story about talking about exploiting market inefficiencies but also was based creating arbitrage opportunities in gambling markets which could be frowned upon in the US)
I have some history with charity work with children with intellectual disabilities but this has lagged since I moved to the US although I have been involved with the company charity efforts. Probably the thing that I should work on the most before I apply.
Post MBA Goals
I want to work at MBB. I know that this is considered cliched and I will work on phrasing it better but that is my genuine goal. Given my current job would be considered a future leadership role in a very large and recognized company I would probably only leave for M7 and I fell that I am probably right on the edge as a candidate for M7.
Also I feel like I naturally interview strongly, I have always been quite social and have been told that I come across very personable in my interviews but obviously this is very dependent on the day and how you get along with the interviewer.
I appreciate any feedback you can give me.