KynnN
Hello experts,
Please help to share feedbacks on my profile to HBS. I know my profile is a bit on the lower end of HBS admission, but HBS is my dream school, so I plan to apply in R2.I want to have a realistic view to allocate time & effort efficiently between schools for this cycle.
Thank you in advance!
Demographics
- Female. 26 y/o. Vietnam
- First generation college student. My dad fought in the Vietnam war (communist side) (Is this a thing worth mentioning in my application?)
Academics
- GMAT: 720 Q50 V36 IR8. Planning a retake, but worst case, I'll go with 720
- Undergrad: Finance in a top school in VN, but not a high-ranked global uni (it has 2-3 HBS alums/current students though). UG UPA is 2.72/4 (Top 50th percentile I guess)
At the time I'm not interested in Finance so I focused on Business competition and internship instead (Won 3-4 national competition 3000+ participants, shortlisted for the National Young Lion (Advertising) competition)
WE 5 years in Marketing, 2 years as a manager for a top F&B company in VN ($1B in Revenue, 1000+ employees). Recently got promoted to lead a category and report directly to CEO cum CMO when my Director resigned. The company I worked for is just around 20 years old, so I've been through the hardest time under crisis in growth with this company. I used to work for a global F&B company for more than one year. 4 promotions during 5 years. 2 awards (employee of the quarter, 2019 & 2023)
EC
- In uni: Club president, leading my class in win the Uni Cup in 1st year. Head of Marketing of a city-scale student club. Coach for primary students
- During work: I'm currently leading a women-focus CSR innitiative in Rural Vietnam for my company
LoRs One Senior Marketing Director who knows me really well. As for the other one, I'm deciding between: 1 manager who used to work with me few years ago, knows me really well outside of work, or 1 C-suite - Chief Sale Officer, he's willing to help but maybe the narrative is not that strong.
Career Goals Impact investing focused on women-led or rural-based enterprises in SEA (It's my goal. But is it problem to the AdCom when I was bad in Finance in Uni but now want to pursue investment? Should I alter my goal?)
Could you help to give feedbacks an a few recommendations for my HBS application? And do you have any suggestions about other schools I should target? MBA is a big investment for me, so I can only afford to take a loan if I go to T15 or Top 20 Global schools. I'm also looking for an admission consultant who can help me specifically in my HBS application.
Thank you so much.
👋 Hey
KynnN,
Here is a detailed profile evaluation for you!
Academics 🎓📊
➡️ GMAT Score of 720: While it's highly impressive, considering a retake for HBS and aiming for a 740+ can add an advantage to your application, especially when considering the competitive pool.
➡️ Undergrad Performance: While the GPA might not be a standout, excelling in national competitions showcases your ability to shine when you're passionate. You should focus on adding quantifiable results.
Professional Experience 🏆📈
➡️ 5 Years in Marketing: Leadership roles in a top F&B company, especially at a young age, is commendable. Promotions and recognitions, like being awarded Employee of the Quarter, twice, highlight your contributions.
➡️ Crisis Management: Experiencing the company's challenging growth phase offers a unique narrative. B-schools appreciate candidates who've weathered storms and come out stronger.
Extracurricular Activities 🤝🎖
➡️ University: Leading roles, both academically and in student organizations, provide a holistic image of your leadership potential. Coaching primary students offers a mentoring perspective.
➡️ Professional Life: Leading a CSR initiative focused on women in Rural Vietnam speaks to your community engagement and drive for positive societal impact. Try adding examples about the initiative and results.
Letters of Recommendation (LoRs) 📝
➡️ Senior Marketing Director: A robust recommendation from someone who's seen your growth, strengths, and potential is invaluable.
➡️ Choices for Second LoR: Opt for the manager who knows you well. Authenticity and depth in the narrative will hold more weight than a title alone.
Career Goals 🌱
➡️ Impact Investing: Given the increased global focus on impact investing, your goal resonates with the need of the hour. Though you had lesser interest in Finance during undergrad, your current role and future aspirations can be aligned by demonstrating the transferable skills and experiences you've garnered.
Target Schools: Based on the details and aspirations,
➡️ Dream: HBS (might be a stretch due its strong competitive pool), Wharton, Booth, Darden 🌟
➡️ Competitive: Michigan Ross, Duke Fuqua, Kellogg, Cornell 🎯
➡️ Safety: Foster, Arizona, University of Illinois⚓
To strengthen your application:
➡️ Narrative Strategy: Weave your experiences into a compelling story that accentuates growth, resilience, and leadership.
➡️ Address Academic Concerns: Use the optional essay to explain the GPA context without sounding defensive. Highlight your achievements like the business competitions as evidence of your capabilities.
➡️ Clarify Career Goals: Ensure coherence between past experiences, MBA aspirations, and future goals.
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