I am a 22-year-old Indian male applicant with a B.Tech in Computer Science (GPA 3.71/4.00) and 6 months of full-time experience as a Technology Analyst at one of the Big 3 global private equity firms. In my current role, I have built automation and platform solutions that have saved ~800 hours across two business units and contributed to the design of a scalable gateway architecture that enables easy, role-specific access to enterprise data through natural language queries. I have also delivered training programs on Azure and its services for a 30-member engineering team. During my undergraduate years, I co-founded and served as the Editorial Head of TEDx, where I helped organize a 400+ attendee event featuring speakers such as Shantanu Naidu; his talk from our event is published on the official TEDx YouTube channel and has crossed 150,000 views. I was also selected as one of 100 students (from 1,000 applicants) for the JP Morgan External Engagement Program and served as a coordinator. In campus placements, I received an offer from the UK wing of one of the Big 4 firms, as one of only 15 candidates selected from a nationwide pool of ~5,000 applicants. My post-MBA goal is to transition into product management or consulting, with a long-term focus on technology-driven strategy roles.


I would appreciate a rating of my profile on a scale of 10, along with specific feedback on improvement areas to strengthen my competitiveness for ISB, SPJIMR, and other top global business schools.