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OA is D , I have no clue how ?
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OA is D , I have no clue how ?

I just read E again . Your original post is missing some thing in E (serve/serving)
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in D "the number" is singular hence singular verb "rises and falls" should be used. also singular for singular "the number" "it" should be used.
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OA must be D indeed.
In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

All blue texts will be in same form or refer to same pronoun.

1. The number of chirps = Singular so accepts 'rises' and 'falls'
2. 'They' is wrong reference pronoun while the noun is singular. 'it' will be the correct choice.

Only D uses all the above points correctly. E directly uses 'in fact that possibly serve...'. Now omit 'in fact that possibly' and you will find: ...temparature, serve as... = so here server wrongly modifies temparature that is incorrect. In B, which wrongly modifies temparature.
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OA must be D indeed.
In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

All blue texts will be in same form or refer to same pronoun.

1. The number of chirps = Singular so accepts 'rises' and 'falls'
2. 'They' is wrong reference pronoun while the noun is singular. 'it' will be the correct choice.

Only D uses all the above points correctly. E directly uses 'in fact that possibly serve...'. Now omit 'in fact that possibly' and you will find: ...temparature, serve as... = so here server wrongly modifies temparature that is incorrect. In B, which wrongly modifies temparature.


Why do you think that "it" in D does not refer to temperature and only number of chirps?
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OA must be D indeed.
In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

All blue texts will be in same form or refer to same pronoun.

1. The number of chirps = Singular so accepts 'rises' and 'falls'
2. 'They' is wrong reference pronoun while the noun is singular. 'it' will be the correct choice.

Only D uses all the above points correctly. E directly uses 'in fact that possibly serve...'. Now omit 'in fact that possibly' and you will find: ...temparature, serve as... = so here server wrongly modifies temparature that is incorrect. In B, which wrongly modifies temparature.


Why do you think that "it" in D does not refer to temperature and only number of chirps?

If it is 'temparature', the sentence stands 'temparature can serve as an approximate thermometer'. Isn't it weird? How temparature can serve as thermometer? temparature is not a device.
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OA must be D indeed.
In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

All blue texts will be in same form or refer to same pronoun.

1. The number of chirps = Singular so accepts 'rises' and 'falls'
2. 'They' is wrong reference pronoun while the noun is singular. 'it' will be the correct choice.

Only D uses all the above points correctly. E directly uses 'in fact that possibly serve...'. Now omit 'in fact that possibly' and you will find: ...temparature, serve as... = so here server wrongly modifies temparature that is incorrect. In B, which wrongly modifies temparature.


Why do you think that "it" in D does not refer to temperature and only number of chirps?

I may be wrong here, but is "it" not a subjective pronoun and hence cannot refer to "temperature"?
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OA must be D indeed.
In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

All blue texts will be in same form or refer to same pronoun.

1. The number of chirps = Singular so accepts 'rises' and 'falls'
2. 'They' is wrong reference pronoun while the noun is singular. 'it' will be the correct choice.

Only D uses all the above points correctly. E directly uses 'in fact that possibly serve...'. Now omit 'in fact that possibly' and you will find: ...temparature, serve as... = so here server wrongly modifies temparature that is incorrect. In B, which wrongly modifies temparature.


Why do you think that "it" in D does not refer to temperature and only number of chirps?

It clearly refers to number of chirps. Temperature can be used as a thermometer.

Use of they was ambiguous as if reffering to species if cricket, but use of it makes it simple & clear.
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. In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.
A. for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve.
B. for attracting females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, which can in fact serve
C. in attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving.
D. to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and it can in fact serve.
E. to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly

D is the answer.

it --clearly refers to "the number of chirps ...."
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. In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.
A. for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve.
B. for attracting females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, which can in fact serve
C. in attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving.
D. to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and it can in fact serve.
E. to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving

IMO D)

the number of is singular so "it" is required.
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D should be the answer.
E changes the meaning by introducing "possibly", which is not what the author is saying. It can certainly be used as a thermometer; its just that the temp. it tells is not 100% accurate.
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Ahh, I have an interesting question:

In this example: "It" is correct because it logically refers to the number of chirps (and it cannot refer to temperature because that would be illogical - therefore, "it" is not ambiguous).

There is the sample rhino SC (11-p504573?t=68546&hilit=+rhino+rhino#p504573) that eliminates "their" because it is ambiguous.

In the rhino example: answer B is incorrect because "their" can refer to tourists. But logically, tourists can't have horns, so therefore, "their" is not really ambiguous.

So my question here, why can we apply one theory to one problem, but can't apply it to another? Or do you think these are completely unrelated problems?




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OA must be D indeed.
In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

All blue texts will be in same form or refer to same pronoun.

1. The number of chirps = Singular so accepts 'rises' and 'falls'
2. 'They' is wrong reference pronoun while the noun is singular. 'it' will be the correct choice.

Only D uses all the above points correctly. E directly uses 'in fact that possibly serve...'. Now omit 'in fact that possibly' and you will find: ...temparature, serve as... = so here server wrongly modifies temparature that is incorrect. In B, which wrongly modifies temparature.


Why do you think that "it" in D does not refer to temperature and only number of chirps?

If it is 'temparature', the sentence stands 'temparature can serve as an approximate thermometer'. Isn't it weird? How temparature can serve as thermometer? temparature is not a device.
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. In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.
A. for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve.
B. for attracting females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, which can in fact serve
C. in attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly serving.
D. to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and it can in fact serve.
E. to attract females rises and falls in accordance with the surrounding temperature, in fact possibly

A B C out because of issues as discussed above !!!
D,E -> are close :shock:
I go for D ,some how E is not sounding corretc since in fact possibly after the main clause does not go well
Whats the OA?
Good question
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I dont agree with you. You have to analyze the sentence always from a gramatical point of view, not from a logical point of view. Taking that into account, "it" is ambigous and can refer to "temperature".

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OA must be D indeed.
In some species of cricket, the number of chirps per minute used by the male for attracting females rise and fall in accordance with the surrounding temperature, and they can in fact serve as an approximate thermometer.

All blue texts will be in same form or refer to same pronoun.

1. The number of chirps = Singular so accepts 'rises' and 'falls'
2. 'They' is wrong reference pronoun while the noun is singular. 'it' will be the correct choice.

Only D uses all the above points correctly. E directly uses 'in fact that possibly serve...'. Now omit 'in fact that possibly' and you will find: ...temparature, serve as... = so here server wrongly modifies temparature that is incorrect. In B, which wrongly modifies temparature.


Why do you think that "it" in D does not refer to temperature and only number of chirps?

If it is 'temparature', the sentence stands 'temparature can serve as an approximate thermometer'. Isn't it weird? How temparature can serve as thermometer? temparature is not a device.
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+1 D

Dont you think that "it" can refer to both temperature and "number"?



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