Bunuel
Napoleon entered Russia in June, 1812, with an army half a million strong, but
leaving in December, 1812, with just less than 30,000 troops.
(A) leaving in December, 1812, with just less
(B) just left in December, 1812, with fewer
(C) left in December, 1812, with just less
(D) left just in December, 1812, with less
(E) left in December, 1812, with just fewer
Magoosh Official Explanation:
Split #1:
countable vs. uncountable. Troops are countable, so we need to use “fewer,” not “less.” We can eliminate (A), (C), and (D) on the basis of this error.
Split #2: One of the more subtle logical splits on GMAT Sentence Correction involves the placement of adverb modifiers. In this sentence, where should the “just” fall? What do we want to denote as significantly limited? Choice (B) has “just left,” as if we expected Napoleon to do something else, something more complicated or exalted, than the act of leaving; that interpretation is not the meaning, because the sentence is not contrasting the intensity of that action with any other.
By contrast, “just fewer than 30,000” retains the meaning of the prompt and emphasizes the shocking reduction in Napoleon’s army, which is the point of the sentence.
The best answer is (E).