ankurgupta03 wrote:
Ivyctor, MBA Help can you pelase comment on my profile and guide me a bit as to how to go about writing the essays:
GMAT: 700 (QA 50,VA 34,AWA 5) (Retaking this week
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700 is good enough. There was no need to retake it.
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GPA: Pretty average
WE: 3.8 years - IT Services- Oracle, Infosys
Extracurricular: Good
Young Professional Ambassador of Teach for India.
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Great, but what are your achievements here? What kind of impact have you brought out?
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Make a Difference volunteer teacher.
Badminton district level player.
Cricket awards at Oracle
Painting awards at Oracle
Professional Achievements:
Accolades for my documentation and work.
Helped in preparing a ppt for a client and won the client for Oracle
Rated among the best in my team at Oracle
Early promotion at work place (Got promoted in just 1.5 years instead of the mandatory 2 years
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Active member of the CSR group at Oracle and play key role in organizing various events.
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Promotions and accolades are good stuff, but then I cannot see specific mention of any leadership example description. Anywhere where you lead a team, motivated a team, created a team etc. Make sure such examples form a descriptive part of your essays and not the hollow one-liners.
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Applied to ISB last year, but was dinged after the interview.
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It's a strong positive that you went till the interview stage because it means the Admissions Committee saw a spark in you. But it would be mistaken to deduct that something during the interview let you down. It's possible that your essays were good but were not strong enough, that they took you to interview stage but didn't have enough meat to make sure your interview went well. Perhaps your interview was less on your strengths and more on your weaknesses or on getting to explain to ISB adcom.
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If someone can add anything new to the template, please feel glad to do it!!