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Surveys have shown that in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the consumption of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have deficient levels of these nutrients in their blood.

(A) in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the consumption of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have

(B) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, they consume one or more essential nutrients insufficiently or have

(C) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, one or more essential nutrients are consumed insufficiently or having

(D) up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries who consume insufficient amounts of one or more essential nutrients or who have

(E) up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries consume insufficient amounts of one or more essential nutrients or have

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Surveys have shown that in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the
consumption of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have
deficient levels of these nutrients in
their blood.
(A) in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the consumption of one or more
essential nutrients is insufficient or they have [reference of they is ambiguous]
(B) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, they consume one or more
essential nutrients insufficiently or have [reference of they is ambiguous]
(C) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, one or more essential
nutrients are consumed insufficiently or having [having looks awkward]
(D) up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries who consume insufficient amounts
of one or more essential nutrients or who have
(E) up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries consume insufficient amounts of
one or more essential nutrients or have [consume insufficient...... have deficient.... are parallel]
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look at choice A.
in the old persons, the consumption is not sufficient
this is at least unclear. which consumption? who consume?
choice E is clear
the old persons consume.
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look at choice A.
in the old persons, the consumption is not sufficient
this is at least unclear. which consumption? who consume?
choice E is clear
the old persons consume.


How can I use parallel structure "X or Y" to eliminate some answer choices. It seems B and E has correct parallel structure.what is wrong with B?

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Surveys have shown that in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the consumption of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have deficient levels of these nutrients in their blood.

(A) in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the consumption of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have --- The verb has to be 'are' rather than 'is' to match the plural nutrients


(B) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, they consume one or more essential nutrients insufficiently or have ---the prepositional 'in up to' and 'they consume' do not gel together. The preposition 'in' and the pronoun 'they' should be dropped to make it a viable structure.

(C) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, one or more essential nutrients are consumed insufficiently or having -- or having is unparallel and a fragment.

(D) up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries who consume insufficient amounts of one or more essential nutrients or who have -- a blatant fragment

(E) up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries consume insufficient amounts of one or more essential nutrients or have --Correct choice.

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Surveys have shown that in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the consumption of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have deficient levels of these nutrients in their blood.

(A) in up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries, the consumption of one or more essential nutrients is insufficient or they have --- The verb has to be 'are' rather than 'is' to match the plural nutrients


(B) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, they consume one or more essential nutrients insufficiently or have ---the prepositional 'in up to' and 'they consume' do not gel together. The preposition 'in' and the pronoun 'they' should be dropped to make it a viable structure.

(C) in up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries, one or more essential nutrients are consumed insufficiently or having -- or having is unparallel and a fragment.

(D) up to 40 percent of elderly people living independently in affluent countries who consume insufficient amounts of one or more essential nutrients or who have -- a blatant fragment

(E) up to 40 percent of elderly people who live independently in affluent countries consume insufficient amounts of one or more essential nutrients or have --Correct choice.




Hi,

I believe that the usage of the singular verb 'is' is correct since it refers to consumption. (A) is incorrect because it has a modifier issue. The opening modifier 'in up to 40 percent of elderly people' does not make sense with consumption or they. Consumption is not inside these people. Neither these people are inside the 40% of the elderly population.

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True, the verb should be 'is' in A as you have said. It is an oversight. In addition, it is not clear what the word 'they' refers to. it could be 40% of the elderly people, or the elderly people, or the countries or the nutrients.
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New post 05 May 2019, 16:04
aside from pronoun ambiguity "they" in option A... is there any other reason why A is incorrect?
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New post 21 May 2019, 13:23
rnn wrote:
aside from pronoun ambiguity "they" in option A... is there any other reason why A is incorrect?


The first part "the consumption of one or more essential nutrients [by them] is insufficient " is passive, where as second part "they have" is active voice.
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