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Re: The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed that preliterate [#permalink]
@argha

I understand your point, but the reason I chose D was

not patriarchal, but matriarchal ... (parallelism)

rings a bell to me somehow..

even the idiom is not X, but Y

am i misunderstanding the concept?
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Re: The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed that preliterate [#permalink]
Also, what is the problem with B.

All B,C and D looks grammatically correct to me, how to choose the best among them. Please explain.
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Also, what is the problem with B.

All B,C and D looks grammatically correct to me, how to choose the best among them. Please explain.


Let me try:

The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed that preliterate European tribes were not patriarchal like later societies and were matriarchal groups centered around worship of the Great Mother goddess.

A The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed that preliterate European tribes were not patriarchal like later societies and were Since a contrast is made, between earlier belief and later fact we need a "but".
B The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed preliterate European tribes not to be patriarchal like later societies but. We need a verb "were" after the but, it is missing. llel ism is affected and so is the meaning.
C The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed that preliterate European tribes were not patriarchal like later societies but were Correct. "were" is present, so is "but"
D It was believed by the anthropologist Marija Gimbutas that preliterate European tribes were not patriarchal like later societies but Again "were" is missing and also passive construction which is not favoured by gmat.
E Preliterate European tribes were believed by the anthropologist Marija Gimbutas not to be patriarchal like later societies and were "but" is missing and "preliterate European tribes were believed" kind of changes the meaning, what did he believe? The European tribes or that they were patriarchal? Also passive construction.
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Re: The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed that preliterate [#permalink]
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Hi grandmaster,

Option D is wrong because the clause starting with "but matriarchal groups ..." is a fragment and lacks a verb.



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IMO, Option D is wrong only because its unnecessary passive and wordy. As far as verb or lack of it is concerned, the sentence is correct.
for example The gold mines lesser known were found not in India but in Africa. The underlined "were" is understood to be there for both with the idion not X but Y.
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argha wrote:
Hi grandmaster,

Option D is wrong because the clause starting with "but matriarchal groups ..." is a fragment and lacks a verb.



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IMO, Option D is wrong only because its unnecessary passive and wordy. As far as verb or lack of it is concerned, the sentence is correct.
for example The gold mines lesser known were found not in India but in Africa. The underlined "were" is understood to be there for both with the idion not X but Y.



In the example you gave, the word 'in' replaces 'were'. Not 'in' Africa but 'in' Africa, and hence 'were' is understood to be for both.

However, in the original question, this is not then case. The word 'were' is required to compare patriarchal and matriarchal.

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Re: The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed that preliterate [#permalink]
Hi All,

I stand to correct my earlier posts on this.

As grandmaster correctly puts it, there seems to be no major error in option D.

Use of "were matriarchal" is not correct as "Not X but Y" requires X & Y to be parallel and in option D, it is maintaining that perfectly.

...were not patriarchal like later societies but matriarchal groups....

As pointed out by some, the use of passive seems to be the only error.

Experts please help.



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argha wrote:
Hi grandmaster,

Option D is wrong because the clause starting with "but matriarchal groups ..." is a fragment and lacks a verb.

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IMO, Option D is wrong only because its unnecessary passive and wordy. As far as verb or lack of it is concerned, the sentence is correct.
for example The gold mines lesser known were found not in India but in Africa. The underlined "were" is understood to be there for both with the idion not X but Y.


Hi Rajeev,

Agree to your point. As long as clarity in meaning is not compromised, second verb can be omitted. As I also mentioned in my post, 'Use of Passive Structure' is the basic reason for the elimination of Choice D.
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Re: The anthropologist Marija Gimbutas believed that preliterate [#permalink]
D,E eliminated due to the usage of passive voice...
C because of the contrast represented correctly....
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