OFFICIAL EXPLANATION
Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
For SC butler Questions Click HereQuote:
The comet Swift-Tuttle is on an orbit that could cause it to eventually collide with the Earth; since the solid nucleus of Swift-Tuttle is of considerable mass, if this was to occur, it might lead to a mass extinction like the Cretaceous-Tertiary extinction event, which occurred about 65 million years ago.
A) since the solid nucleus of Swift-Tuttle is of considerable mass, if this was to occur, it might lead to a mass extinction like the Cretaceous-Tertiary extinction event,
B) since the solid nucleus of Swift-Tuttle is of considerable mass, if such a collision were to occur, it might lead to a mass extinction like the Cretaceous-Tertiary extinction event,
C) since the solid nucleus of Swift-Tuttle is of considerable mass, if this were to occur, it might lead to a mass extinction like the Cretaceous-Tertiary extinction event,
D) since the solid nucleus of Swift-Tuttle is of considerable mass, if such a collision was to occur, it might lead to a mass extinction like the Cretaceous-Tertiary extinction event,
E) since the solid nucleus of Swift-Tuttle is of considerable mass, if such a collision were to occur, this might lead to a mass extinction like the Cretaceous-Tertiary extinction event,
• Split #1: For hypothetical situations, use "If . . . were, . . . then would"
The sentence describes a collision that has not occurred and thus refers to a hypothetical condition and its probable result.
In such a situation, use the IF WERE/THEN WOULD construction (see Takeaway #1, below), which is often called a Type 2 conditional.
Options A and D incorrectly describe the not-yet-occurred collision by using the word "was."
The correct verb is
were, not
was.
This way is correct: . . .
if such a collision were to occur . . .Eliminate options A and D
• Split #2: the overwhelming majority of the time, the word "this" cannot be used as a standalone pronoun.
The word
this is very rarely a standalone pronoun on the GMAT.
Typically,
this "points" at a noun:
-- The book was on this red chair by the fireplace, not on that big white couch.
-- If you have a
This guideline holds 99 percent of the time, but do see Takeaway #2, below, in which I link you to an official question that uses "this" as a standalone pronoun.
Options C and E incorrectly use "this" as a standalone pronoun.
Eliminate C and E
The correct answer is B.• TAKEAWAY #1: How to construct a
hypothetical when the verb
was is involved
Change the verb attached to the hypothetical event from
was to
were.IF . . . WERE, THEN . . . WOULD
→
If I were you, I would take TOEFL or IELTS now; you are nearly fluent and ready.→
If wishes were horses, beggars would ride. • TAKEAWAY #2: GMAC's rejection of
this as a standalone pronoun is not absolute.
THIS without a clear reference is almost always wrong.→
This is a "determiner." It "points" to the noun in question --
determines for us that it is
this noun, not
that one.
-- Typically, GMAC requires "this" to "point" to a noun:
this red chair near me, not
that white couch on the other side of the room. (
This and
that, used in this way, are also called "demonstrative adjectives." To demonstrate is to show, and adjectives modify nouns.)
-- For the first time that I know of,
OG 2020 published a question in which THIS was a standalone pronoun rather than a demonstrative adjective accompanied by a noun.
-- In that
OG 2020 question, GMAC allowed THIS to refer to a situation described but not actually named by a noun.
Spoiler alert: if you click on the link, the correct answer to a new official question is revealed
You can find that official question
-- Be on the lookout. GMAC has signaled that "this" as a standalone is both not preferred and occasionally okay.
I doubt that GMAC will start allowing THIS as a standalone on a
routine basis, but be aware that GMAC seems to have signaled that the word
this, standing alone, is occasionally allowed.
COMMENTSThe analysis and explanations are very good.
Nice work.
PyjamaScientist , I am bumping your answer to Best Community Reply.