(A). I took 01:37. A
brilliant question indeed. Nice use of
parallelism,
intended meaning, and
comma + verb-ing modifier.
Analysis: From the initial read we can make out the meaning-
Males are more interested in collecting food than are females. What follows next depicts, "
how they are more interested" or "
what actions" of theirs prove their
more interest. So, the
comma + spending the majority of their time in the deep waters searching for small fish and other edibles, modifies the
preceding verb/action. And, the original statement looks pretty much thorough with this meaning with properly placed
modifiers and
grammar.
Quote:
The males of the species are more interested than the females in collecting food, spending the majority of their time in the deep waters searching for small fish and other edibles.
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A. than the females in collecting food, spending the majority of their time in the deep waters searching
Correct for the reasons stated above. One more thing to note here is- "You have to see the use of "ellipsis" by the author after
than the females". Complete sentence without ellipsis will be: The males of the species are more interested
in collecting food(optional but redundant) than the females
are interested(optional but redundant) in collecting food. As, "are interested" is stated ahead in the sentence, it is okay to
not repeat that part again after "than the females". And as mentioned above in analysis, comma + spending modifies the entire preceding clause (action modifier if you like the
jargon).
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B. than the females are in collecting food, in spending the majority of their time in the deep waters and in searching
This makes
in collecting food, in spending time, and in searching fish three separate entities. This is not the correct sequence. The latter two modify the first action. So, this option choice, though
grammatical, distorts the intended meaning and is thus wrong.
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C. in collecting food than the females, spend the majority of their time in the deep waters and search
You can interpret two meanings from this sentence:
The males are more interested in collecting food than females are interested in collecting food, or,
The males are more interested in collecting food than in collecting the females. (Dothrakis?)Some
may argue that the latter may not make much
sense, and that is true, but it does lead to an meaning ambiguity which (A) avoids completely by not placing
in collecting and
the females on two sides of comparison marker "
than". So, (A) is better than (D). Also, the part after
comma + spend is problematic. The grammar is
off. There's no reason to use
Simple Past tense when the first part is stated nicely in
Present tense. Such verb tense change is not appreciated in GMAT. Also, if the verb change has to happen, it should be done organically and with proper conjunction.
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D. in collecting food than the females, spending the majority of their time in the deep waters and searching
Same meaning error as choice (C).
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E. in collecting food than are the females, who spend the majority of their time in the deep waters searching
This corrects the meaning error in (C) and (D) by placing "
are" in front of "
the females". But, it introduces
pronoun ambiguity with "
who" referring to
the females. Now, the
action of
spending majority time and searching for fish in deep waters is attributed to the
females and not the
males. This is not the meaning that is intended by the author. Hence, this is also incorrect.