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Re: The military tests the endurance of potential recruits, [#permalink]
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Official Answer (OA) – B
Concepts Tested – Meaning, Run-on
The sentence appears to be testing us on parallel construction and there is a
tendency to make ‘tests’ parallel with ‘devises’. However for this to be correct we
need an ‘and’ before ‘devises’, which is not the case. In fact this sentence is not
testing you on parallel construction at all, it is actually testing you on your
understanding of the meaning of the sentence and whether you can logically
connect its various parts. B gets this spot on by using ‘by’ to link the two parts of
the sentence and is the best answer.

C - The use of ‘it’ to refer to the ‘military’ is grammatically correct but makes no
logical sense

D - This is a run-on sentence because it uses a comma to connect two
independent clauses

E - The use of ‘with’ is awkward and unclear
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Re: The military tests the endurance of potential recruits, [#permalink]
If this below sentence is a choice this this will be a correct choice?

The military tests the endurance of potential recruits, devising various ordeals, including one requiring them to hike for 40 miles with a load of 50 pounds on their backs.

---I am trying to understand is there will be any meaning change between the correct choice and this sentence.
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sandy182 wrote:
If this below sentence is a choice this this will be a correct choice?

The military tests the endurance of potential recruits, devising various ordeals, including one requiring them to hike for 40 miles with a load of 50 pounds on their backs.

---I am trying to understand is there will be any meaning change between the correct choice and this sentence.


Hello sandy182,

We hope this finds you well.

To answer your query, the sentence you have provided will not be correct; this sentence uses the present participle ("verb+ing" - "requiring" in this sentence) to refer to a statement of universal fact; please remember, statements of universal fact are best conveyed through the simple present tense.

All the best!
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