Blair15
sayantanc2k
Blair15
Whose/Which present after the comma in options C and D modify the word right before the comma or the noun phrase before the comma i.e "depiction of traditional notions...masculinity"?
I always get confused about such things, can someone please help?
Normally the
modifier touch rule applies, i.e. a modifier must touch the noun it modifies. However there are some exceptions to the
touch rule. One such exception is when another vital modifier, typically a prepositional phrase starting with "of", falls between the modifier and the modified noun.
Example:
His way of solving problem, which is often found to be effective, is not considered a conventional way by the experts.
In the above sentence the modifier "which is often..." modifies the noun "way" - you would notice that another modifier, the vital modifier "of solving problem", comes betwen the modifier "which is often..." and the modified noun "way".
I would leave it to you to draw the parrallel between the example above and the options C and D.
Sorry i am still finding it difficult to comprehend.
Ok, so I would extend the explanation to the options C and D as below:
Modified noun = "depiction".
Modifier = "whose...." / "which...".
Ideally, according to the
touch rule, the modifier "whose..." / "which..." should touch the modified noun "depiction". So, ideal placement is:
.....
Modified noun,
modifier....
So are the options C and D wrong because of this
touch rule issue? The answer is no.
There is an exception to the
touch rule that allows inclusion of a vital "of" phrase between the modified noun and the modifier. Here,
vital "of" phrase = "of traditional notions of family honor and masculinity".
Therefore although the modifier "whose...." / "which..." does not touch the modified noun "depiction", the modifier placement is alright because a vital phrase "of traditional notions of family honor and masculinity" is inserted in between. So, accepted placement is:
Modified noun +
vital "of" phrase,
modifierSo option C and D are wrong not because of the above mentioned modifier issue, but because of some other issue, which is not in the scope of your query, I understand.
If the explanation is still not clear, please feel free to post again.