PyjamaScientist
Hi
AndrewN,
I have a small doubt here.
In the option choices A and E, what makes the option choice E wrong compared to A?
Why is
...consist of... author's dexterity in portraying such caricatures preferred over
....consist of... author's dexterity to portray such caricatures?
Also, is this on the lines of what GMAT tests?
Hello,
PyjamaScientist. Yes, I think this type of question could show up on the GMAT™. Right away, we are forced to confront an idiom, at least if we go on a case-by-case basis within the underlined portion.
Quote:
The two main approaches to socio-political analysis of Alice in Wonderland consist of either praising the author's dexterity in portraying such caricatures of contemporary figures or examining the sources of such caricatures.
A) in portraying such caricatures of contemporary figures or examining the sources of such caricatures
B) in portraying such caricatures of contemporary figures and to examine the sources of such caricatures
C) in portraying such caricatures of contemporary figures, and examining the sources of such caricatures
D) to portray such caricatures of contemporary figures or to examine the sources of such caricatures
E) to portray such caricatures of contemporary figures or examining the sources of such caricatures
Split #1: Idiom —
dexterity in portraying versus
dexterity to portrayAnalysis: This is a call on which idiom belongs, and to a native speaker, the infinitive clearly loses out. Somebody displays dexterity in doing something, not to do something. Both (D) and (E) can fall by the wayside if you know this idiom.
Split #2: Idiom —
or versus
andAnalysis: Since the non-underlined portion says
consist of either, we expect to see an
either X or Y construct, not a decidedly unidiomatic
either X and Y. Choices (B) and (C) can be eliminated. This is not the sort of issue that ought to be plaguing anyone who wishes to score well on the GMAT™.
If you catch the first two splits, then you are already in a position to get behind (A), the original sentence, as the only answer that makes sense. (I did commit to it at this point—the question took me 28 seconds.) However, there are other points of discussion, so I will keep going.
Split #3: Parallelism
(A)
in portraying... or examining(B)
in portraying... and to examine (C)
in portraying... and examining(D)
to portray... or to examine(E)
to portray... or examiningAnalysis: Once you start studying for the exam, you come to appreciate how much the test prefers parallel constructs. Here, choices (B) and (E) present mismatched pairs of words with some sort of -ing/infinitive combination, and that is a no-no.
There is really no justifiable answer but (A) here. It ticks all the right boxes, and, most importantly, nothing else does.
I hope the above analysis proves useful to you. Good luck with your studies.
- Andrew