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During the Civil war, nearly three times as many Americans lost their lives from infections that could have been prevented with antiseptic techniques
than were killed on the battlefield
A. than
B. than those who
C. than the number who
D. as the number who
E. as
KAPLAN OFFICIAL EXPLANATION:
Step 1: Read the Original Sentence Carefully, Looking for ErrorsThe underlined portion here is only one word: “than.” Note that in the beginning of the sentence, the phrase “nearly three times as many” indicates a comparison. Comparisons require parallel construction. If you remove the intervening words “Americans . . . antiseptic techniques,” the sentence would read, “nearly three times as many than.” That’s an incorrect construction.
Step 2: Scan and Group the Answer ChoicesOne choice here is between “than” in (A), (B), and (C) and “as” in (D) and (E), so you would have to decide which one is correct even if you didn’t spot the error while completing Step 1 of the Kaplan Method.
Step 3: Eliminate Choices Until Only One RemainsThe correct word is “as,” to complete the construction “as many . . . as . . .” Thus (A), (B), and (C) are all out. But the comparison also requires parallel structure to “Americans lost their lives . . .” “The number” is not parallel to “Americans.” So (D) needs to be eliminated in favor of (E). Choice (E) is the correct answer.