In a process that has become
de rigueur following the end of every presidency, presidential libraries are sprouting up like carbuncles all over the land,
testifying not so much to a sense of history among our politicians than it reflects their unbridled vainglory.
A. testifying not
so much to a sense of history among our politicians
than it reflects their
Wrong. "
so X than Y" is wrong comparison.
B. testifying less to a sense of history among our ploiticians than
it reflects their
Wrong.
- Parallelism problem: testifying less +
noun-phrase than +
clause.....
- "it" refers to what?
C. not so much testifying to a sense of history among our politicians as
it reflects their
Wrong.
- Parallelism problem: not SO MUCH + noun phrase AS + clause.
- "it" refers to what?
D. testifying not
as more to a sense of history among our politicians than to an
Wrong.
- "As more...than" is wrong.
E. testifying not so much to a sense of history among out politicians as to their
Correct. Good Verb-ing modifier
Hope it helps.