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12 Days of Christmas GMAT Competition with Lots of FunThe short lived Corsican Republic was a uniquely progressive nation
at its 1755 founding for deciding to grant full voting rights to all adult citizens.
(A) at its 1755 founding for deciding to grant
(B) for the decision at its 1755 founding to grant
(C) when it was founded in 1755 for its decision to grant
(D) by deciding at its founding in 1755 on the granting of
(E) in deciding at its founding in 1755 to grant
Experts' Global Official ExplanationRedundancy/Awkwardness + Verb Forms + Modifiers + MeaningUnderstanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of this sentence is that the Corsican Republic was uniquely progressive, in that it granted full voting rights to all adult citizens at the time of its founding in 1755.
• For referring to the purpose or intent of an action, the infinitive verb form (“to + base form of verb") is preferred over the present participle ("verb+ing" - "granting" in this sentence) construction.
A. This answer choice incorrectly uses “1755” to modify “founding”, illogically implying that “the Corsican Republic” had multiple foundings, one of which occurred in 1755; the intended meaning of the sentence is that the Corsican Republic was uniquely progressive, in that it granted full voting rights to all adult citizens at the time of its founding in 1755.
B. Trap. This answer choice incorrectly uses “1755” to modify “founding”, illogically implying that “the Corsican Republic” had multiple foundings, one of which occurred in 1755; the intended meaning of the sentence is that the Corsican Republic was uniquely progressive, in that it granted full voting rights to all adult citizens at the time of its founding in 1755.
C. Trap. This answer choice incorrectly uses “was a uniquely progressive nation when it was founded” to modify “the Corsican Republic”, incorrectly implying that the nation was already “uniquely progressive” at the time of its founding; the intended meaning of the sentence is that the Corsican Republic was uniquely progressive, in that it granted full voting rights to all adult citizens at the time of its founding in 1755.
D. This answer choice uses the present participle (“verb+ing” – “granting” in this sentence), acting as a noun, to refer to the intent of the action “deciding”; please remember, for referring to the purpose or intent of an action, the infinitive verb form (“to + base form of verb") is preferred over the present participle ("verb+ing" - "granting" in this sentence) construction.
E. Correct. This answer choice correctly uses “in 1755” to modify “founding” and correctly uses “in deciding…to grant” to modify “the Corsican Republic”, conveying the intended meaning of the sentence- that the Corsican Republic was uniquely progressive, in that it granted full voting rights to all adult citizens at the time of its founding in 1755. Further, Option E uses the infinitive verb form (“to + base form of verb"- "to + grant" in this sentence) to refer to the intent of the action “deciding”.
E is the best answer choice.