Hi,
I'm targeting to apply for the Round 1 of ISB (Deadline: 20th Sep). I've written the first drafts for the essays based on various videos and sites' suggestions on how an ISB essay should be. If there is any alumni here, could you please review my essays?
A bit of a background of mine:
GMAT focus edition score: 675
Work ex: 2 years and 3 months (as of today) as a data analyst in a multinational bank
Internships: 2 product management internships- 1 in bigbasket, 1 in ninjacart; 1 ui/ux internship; 1 research internship
Graduation: B.Arch from an IIT. CGPA:8.29
12th percentage: 84.77%
10th cgpa: 10 cgpa
Gender: Female
Awards and Achievements: 2 awards from workplace, 1 PoR in wokrplace (ERG core committee), 1 esteemed award from university, multiple PoRs in university (in digital art, literature, social service) , multiple certificates of recognition in state level exams
Goal post MBA: Career in product management/ Strategy roles