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Traditionally, the term “blue moon” does not refer to the second full moon of a month, as they popularly think, but to the third full moon of a season with four full moons—a season is delimited by the equinoxes and solstices.
A) does not refer to the second full moon of a month, as they popularly think, but [refers] to the
B) does not refer to the second full moon of a month, which is popularly thought, but [refers] to the
C) refers not to the second full moon of a month, as is popularly thought, but to the
D) refers not to the second full moon of a month, which is what is popularly thought, but [TO] the
E) refers not to the second full moon of a month, as would be popularly thought, and does refer to instead the
MAGOOSH OFFICIAL ANSWERSplit #1: the Inside/Outside ruleThe construction in this sentence is
Not X But Y.One important rule about parallelism is the Once Outside, Twice Inside rule.
This rule comes into effect when we have correlated conjunctions—that is, a coupled pair of conjunctions marking the two halves of the parallelism: examples include “both X and Y,” “neither X nor Y,” “not X but Y,” and “not only X but also Y.”
When any of these are used, the parallelism has a clear start at the beginning of the first word.
Anything that is
within the “both X and Y” structure is “inside,” and anything that comes
before or after it is “outside.”
Now, suppose a preposition applies to words in both branches of the parallelism. We have two options:
Once Outside:
to both X and Y
Twice Inside: both
to X and
to Y
In the first, the preposition “to” appears once “outside,” that is, before the parallelism begins.
In the second, a “to” follows each of the correlated conjunctions, “inside” the parallelism.
Both are correct: that is, once outside or twice inside is correct.
[Be careful.] Common mistake patterns are “once inside” or “once outside, once inside.”
In this question, it’s a verb, “refer,” that is the element that may fall inside or outside.
In all five choices, the “to” falls inside the parallelism in the first branch and needs to be repeated.
[In closed pairs, the preposition does not "carry over" from the X to the Y element. You must restate it.]
Choice (A): the verb “refer” occurs only once inside; this choice is incorrect.
Choice (B): the structure “refer to” occurs only once inside; this choice is incorrect.
Choice (C): the verb “refer” occurs once outside, and “to” occurs twice inside; this is error-free
Choice (D): the verb “refer” occurs once outside, but “to” occurs only once inside; this choice is incorrect.
Choice (E): the structure “refers to” occurs once inside and once inside; this choice is incorrect.
On the basis of that single split, we have isolated a single correct answer. For the sake of understanding the grammar of other parts of the sentence, I will explore a second split.
Split #2: popular thoughtWhat is the correct idiomatic way to talk about popular thought? Here are how these five answer choices handle it:
Choice (A): “as they popularly think”—the pronoun “they” has no clear antecedent, so this choice is incorrect.
Choice (B): “which is popularly thought”—the antecedent of pronoun “which” is the action of the preceding clause; a pronoun cannot refer to an action, so this choice is incorrect.
Choice (C): “as is popularly thought”—this elegant phrase is common in higher-quality writing; this is error-free.
Choice (D): “which is what is popularly thought”—repeats the pronoun mistake of (B); this choice is incorrect.
Choice (E): “as would be popularly thought”—this is grammatically correct, but illogically it is hypothetical, suggesting that it is speaking about something contrary-to-fact. This does not match the situation. This choice is incorrect.
As both splits have made clear, the only possible answer is (C).