Official Solution:
Proponents of relaxations that Censorship Board allow production houses each year to provide them enough space to make creative pieces of work consider them vital for the economic growth of the entertainment industry, while critics denounce the relaxations as a leeway that increases the revenue of the production houses but damages the moral character of the children.
A. of relaxations that Censorship Board allow production houses each year to provide them enough space to make creative pieces of work consider them
B. consider relaxations that Censorship Board allows production houses each year to provide them enough space to make creative piece of works to be
C. of relaxations that Censorship Board allow production houses each year to provide them enough space to make creative pieces of work consider them as
D. consider relaxations that Censorship Board allows production houses each year to provide the producers enough space to make creative pieces of work
E. of relaxations that Censorship Board allows production houses each year to provide them enough space to make creative pieces of work consider the relaxations to be
A. The pronoun “them” is used two times, referring to a different antecedent each time. Such usage is fundamentally wrong. If the same pronoun is used multiple times in a sentence, it should refer to the same antecedent.
Moreover, each time the antecedent is unclear. For the first “them”, the antecedent should be “producers”, the noun which is missing entirely from the sentence. For the second “them”, the antecedent should be “relaxations”, but there are other plural nouns in the sentence ( e.g., “production houses”) that qualify to be the antecedent.
Plural noun “allow” is wrongly used with the singular subject “ Board”.
B. The idiom “consider X to be Y” is wrong. (Here X = relaxations, Y = vital)
The pronoun “them” is ambiguous. The antecedent should be “producers”, the noun which is missing entirely from the sentence.
C. The pronoun “them” is used two times, referring to a different antecedent each time. Such usage is fundamentally wrong. If the same pronoun is used multiple times in a sentence, it should refer to the same antecedent.
Moreover, each time the antecedent is unclear. For the first “them”, the antecedent should be “producers”, the noun which is missing entirely from the sentence. For the second “them”, the antecedent should be “relaxations”, but there are other plural nouns in the sentence ( e.g., “production houses”) that qualify to be the antecedent.
Plural noun “allow” is wrongly used with the singular subject “ Board”.
The idiom “consider X as Y” is wrong. (Here X = relaxations, Y = vital)
D. CORRECT. The idiom “consider X Y” is correct. (Here X = relaxations, Y = vital)
The correct parallelism format is maintained:
Proponents consider relaxations (+ modifier) vital, while critics denounce the relaxations.
The singular subject “Board” uses the singular verb “allows”.
E. The idiom “consider X to be Y” is wrong. (Here X = relaxations, Y = vital)
The pronoun “them” is ambiguous. The antecedent should be “producers”, the noun which is missing entirely from the sentence.
Answer: D