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03 Jan 2007, 02:05
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It's 1AM, and my head is burning...Just one sentence to complete the application, but I don't know how to write it well...
Anyone want to play with the sentence and give me some advices? Thank a lot...
I want to say:
I have a strong interest in social activities. And I find it is a good fit for Yale SOM, because Yale wants to train leaders with society involvements.
my sentence:
"I have a strong interest in social activities, which is a good fit for Yale’s commitment to train leaders with society involvement."
But I found my sentence is not okie. Can not explain....all suggestions are welcome and appreciated....
Thank you....
Anyone want to play with the sentence and give me some advices? Thank a lot...
I want to say:
I have a strong interest in social activities. And I find it is a good fit for Yale SOM, because Yale wants to train leaders with society involvements.
my sentence:
"I have a strong interest in social activities, which is a good fit for Yale’s commitment to train leaders with society involvement."
But I found my sentence is not okie. Can not explain....all suggestions are welcome and appreciated....
Thank you....
03 Jan 2007, 02:23
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My 2 cents....
My passion in Social Development is alligned with Yales philosophy of training leaders comitted to broader societal impacts. Hence, I believe that I will be a good fit......
If you get in, do ask the Ad Com if my sentence made the difference!
My passion in Social Development is alligned with Yales philosophy of training leaders comitted to broader societal impacts. Hence, I believe that I will be a good fit......
If you get in, do ask the Ad Com if my sentence made the difference!
03 Jan 2007, 02:56
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thank you DJM...I sure do...
