OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Day 143: Sentence Correction (SC2)
For SC butler Questions Click HereDuring the charity walk-a-thon, the number of miles walked by the fifteen volunteers
were combined to total 110 miles, a distance that is about Long Island's length.
A)
were combined to total 110 miles, a distance t
hat is about
Long Island's length
B)
were combined to total 110 miles, a distance about the length of Long Island
C) was combined to total 110 miles, a distance
that is about
Long Island's length
D) was combined to total 110 miles, [a distance?] about
Long Island's length
E) was combined to total 110 miles, a distance about the length of Long Island
PROCESS OF ELIMINATION• Split #1 Subject verb agreementthe number of is always singular. (By contrast, "A number of " is always plural.)
Options A and B incorrectly pair "a number of" with
were.Eliminate A and B
• Split #2: concisionThese two phrases mean the same thing.
... 110 miles, a distance about the length of Long Island.
... 110 miles, a distance that is about the length of Long Island.
We do not need
that is.
Eliminate C. (Option A is already gone.)
• ClarityCompare D and E.
•
length of Long Island is preferred to
Long Island's lengthLong Island's length is not wrong. It's just odd and
• (D) is not as clear as (E) is.
• what does
about modify in D? Not clear
In (E) a distance is parallel to . . . a distance (110 miles)
E is the better sentence.COMMENTSJazpants , welcome to SC Butler!
ChuHoaiNam , yes, what you heard of generally correct, though what you heard is a guideline only: inanimate objects typically do not take the
X's Y construction. (X's Y = Long Island's length)
Inanimate objects usually take the possessive construction
Y of X (the length of Long Island).
Be careful, though. Many exceptions exist. I would use that guideline at the end of my analysis. Do not strike an answer simply because of an
X's Y construction. Mark the answer as "suspicious." Then compare at the end.
As far as I can tell, everyone explained. Kudos to all.