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Being processed through production methods that alter physical properties,
manufacturers form various types of glass in the realization that the more specified the materials they produce, the wider their sales market will be.
A. manufacturers form various types of glass in the realization that the more specified the materials they produce, the wider their sales market will be
B. glass is formed into various types by manufacturers in the realization that the more specified the materials they produce, their sales market will be wider
C. glass is formed into various types by manufacturers who realize that the more specified the materials they produce, the sales market will be wider
D. manufacturers realize that the more specified the materials they produce, the wider their sales market will be and, therefore, form various types of glass
E. glass is formed into a variety of types by manufacturers in the realization that the more specified the materials they produce, the wider their sales market will be
Official Explanation
(A) Incorrect.This answer choice is \(grammatically\) incorrect. The original sentence begins with a
modifier: Being processed through production methods that alter physical properties. A modifier should be placed right next to the noun it describes. The only noun that this modifier can logically modify is glass. However, what immediately follows the modifier is manufacturers and manufacturers cannot be processed through production methods.
What helps us identify this question as a Dangling Modifier question as well as identify the mistake is the following
Stop Sign:A modifier, characterized by all of the following:
1. Verb+ing or Verb in 3rd form
2. Separated from the rest of the sentence by a comma
3. Appears at the very beginning of the sentenceWhenever you see this
Stop Sign, focus on the
modifier: check whether the noun right after the modifier is indeed the noun that the modifier describes. If it isn't - you've found your mistake.
(B) Incorrect.Although this answer choice corrects the
original Modifier mistake by placing the noun being described (glass) directly after the modifier Being processed through production methods that alter physical properties, it is
grammatically incorrect.The question uses a
Double Comparative. The second part of a
Double Comparative must begin with the word the. In this answer choice, however, it begins with the word their.
(C) Incorrect.Same as B
(D) Incorrect.Same as A
(E) Excellent!
This answer choice corrects the original Dangling Modifier mistake by placing the noun being described (glass) directly after the modifier Being processed through production methods that alter physical properties.
Answer: E