Reading reports and comparing statistical analyses, authorities gather information about the weather along a flight route, but in some cases they find it particularly difficult to decide whether to approve a flight or not.
A. authorities gather information about the weather along a flight route, but in some cases they find it particularly difficult to decide whether to approve a flight or not
Whether or not is redundant. So Wrong.
B. authorities gather information about the weather along a flight route, but in some cases they find it particularly difficult to decide if a flight should be approved
Use of if is inappropriate. Wrong
C. information about the weather along a flight route is gathered by authorities, but in some cases they find it particularly difficult to decide whether to approve a flight
Modifier is used to modify authorities. Wrong
D. authorities gather information about the weather along a flight route, but in some cases they find it particularly difficult to decide whether to approve a flight
Correct
E. authorities gather information about the weather along a flight route, but in some cases they find it particularly difficult to decide whether or not to approve a flight
Whether or not is redundant. So Wrong.