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The actual sentence is -
Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about
- the causes of mass hysteria and
- why, at times, it leaves some unmoved though it is overcome by many others.

As soon as I read "some" and "many others", I got a clue that the sentence talks about two different groups. Clearly, it won't talk about similarity if it mentions two different groups. :)

We need a "contrast"

Only Choices C (despite) and E (while) present the contrasts.

Again , note that we say either "despite" or "in spite OF" . There is nothing called "despite OF"
In spite OF = Despite
Thus, eliminate Choice C as well.

Only Choice E can be correct.

IMO E
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Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about the causes of mass hysteria and why, at times, it leaves some unmoved though it is overcome by many others.

A) though it is overcome by
it is not making the right reference therefore out
B) when overcoming
when isn't the right usage therefore out

C) despite of overcoming
of is unnecessary and distorts the meaning therefore out

D) where overcoming
it doesn't make an ounce of sense therefore out

E) while overcoming
This makes sense therefore our answer

Therefore IMO E
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My answer is (E). It took me 57 seconds.

(A) It (=mass hysteria) can overcome many others, or many others can be overcome by mass hysteria. It is incorrect to say that "it is overcome by many others".

Definition of Overcome: To overpower, as with emotion; affect deeply.

(B) "when" indicates that "leaving some unmoved" and "overcoming many others" occurred at the same time when no such simultaneity is called for.

(C) Either "despite something" or "in spite of something" but never "despite of".
Even if "of" is removed, the meaning is still more convoluted than that of (E).

(D) "where" indicates that "leaving some unmoved" and "overcoming many others" occurred in the same place when no such conterminousness is called for.

(E) Appropriate meaning and contrast.
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Dear Friends,

Here is a detailed explanation to this question-
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Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about the causes of mass hysteria and why, at times, it leaves some unmoved though it is overcome by many others.

A) though it is overcome by

B) when overcoming

C) despite of overcoming

D) where overcoming

E) while overcoming
Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:
Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of the crucial part of this sentence is that mass hysteria leaves some unmoved while simultaneously overcoming many others.

Concepts tested here: Meaning + Idioms

• “while” is used for actions that take place simultaneously, irrespective of whether these actions are positive, negative, or neutral.
• “although” and “despite” are used to show contrast.
• "where" is only used to refer to a physical location.
• “when” is only used to refer to a point in time.

A: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "though it is overcome"; the construction of this phrase illogically implies that mass hysteria leaves some unmoved, but many others overcome it; the intended meaning is that mass hysteria leaves some unmoved while simultaneously overcoming many others. Further, Option A incorrectly uses "though" to simultaneous actions -- mass hysteria leaving some unmoved and mass hysteria overcoming many other; please remember, “while” is used for actions that take place simultaneously, and "although", "despite", and their variations are used to show contrast.

B: This answer choice incorrectly uses "when" to refer to simultaneous actions -- mass hysteria leaving some unmoved and mass hysteria overcoming many others; please remember, “while” is used for actions that take place simultaneously, and "when" is only used to refer to a point in time.

C: This answer choice alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "despite of overcoming"; the use of "despite" incorrectly implies that mass hysteria leaves some unmoved in contrast to the fact that it overcame many others; the intended meaning is that mass hysteria leaves some unmoved while simultaneously overcoming many others; please remember, “while” is used for actions that take place simultaneously, and "although", "despite", and their variations are used to show contrast. Further, Option C incorrectly uses the unidiomatic construction "despite of" rather than one of the correct, idiomatic constructions "in spite of" or "despite"; please remember, "in spite of" and "despite" are the correct, idiomatic constructions.

D: This answer choice incorrectly uses "where" to refer to simultaneous actions -- mass hysteria leaving some unmoved and mass hysteria overcoming many others; please remember, “while” is used for actions that take place simultaneously, and "where" is only used to refer to a physical location.

E: Correct. This answer choice uses the phrase "while overcoming", conveying the intended meaning - that mass hysteria leaves some unmoved while simultaneously overcoming many others. Further, Option E correctly uses "while" to refer to simultaneous actions -- mass hysteria leaving some unmoved and mass hysteria overcoming many others.

Hence, E is the best answer choice.

To understand the concept of "Although", "Though", "Despite", and "While" on GMAT you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):


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Correct Option E

Eliminate A, and C for usage of though and despite of – to indicate contrast situation between the two clause

Option A
Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about
the causes of mass hysteria and why, at times,
it leaves some unmoved though
it is overcome by
many others.
Wrong: Though is a contrast indicator,

Option C
Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about
the causes of mass hysteria and why, at times,
it leaves some unmoved despite of
overcoming by
many others
Wrong: Despite of is a phrase with prepositional “of” used as a contrast indicator

Option D
Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about
the causes of mass hysteria and why, at times,
it leaves some unmoved where
overcoming by
many others.
Wrong: Where is a adverb used in or to what place or position, is used wrong in the sentence.

Both are Adverb, relate to action performed to indicate Time,
main differance, which makes option E correct
while” usage in a clause with a continuous action, using a verb in a continuous tense.
when” in a clause with a single action, using a simple past or present tense

Option B - Wrong
Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about
the causes of mass hysteria and why, at times,
it leaves some unmoved when
overcoming by
many others.

Option E - Correct
Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about
the causes of mass hysteria and why, at times,
it leaves some unmoved while
overcoming
by many others.
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