OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Psychohistorians who study cases such as the Salem Witch Trials still disagree about the causes of mass hysteria and why, at times, it leaves some unmoved
though it is overcome by many others.
• Meaning?
Psychohistorians disagree about why mass hysteria leaves some people unaffected but overtakes many other people.
This sentence contains
contrast.
THE OPTIONS in a shortened sentenceQuote:
A) Psychohistorians disagree about why, at times, [mass hysteria] leaves some unmoved
though it is overcome by many others.
• Illogical
→ Let's think about this one: Mass hysteria does
not affect some people [who are unmoved]
though mass hysteria is overcome [is conquered] by many other people?
Read the option again.
Logically, this option nonsensically means:
mass hysteria does not affect some people and does not affect many others.• Meaning error -
though→ The word
though is a contrast word (a subordinating conjunction, if you like formal terms), but
though is used incorrectly in this sentence.
The word "it" refers to mass hysteria, which is
not overcome by many people (else the phenomenon would not be called "mass" hysteria).
→ Clues are in the sentence
→ The sentence sets up a contrast between
some [people] and
many others.The sentence mentions two groups of similarly situated people because the groups are different.
One group of people is not affected by mass hysteria.
Another group of people is deeply affected by mass hysteria—in fact, people in this group are overcome by mass hysteria.
Option A's meaning is illogical and nonsensical.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) Psychohistorians disagree about why, at times, [mass hysteria] leaves some unmoved
when overcoming many others.
• illogical
→
when signals events that must happen at the same time.
When suggests
only when. That is, it is only when mass hysteria is overcoming many people that some others are left unaffected.
No logical causality exists, however, between the occurrence of one event and the consequent occurrence of the other.
Just because Person A gets overwhelmed by mass hysteria does not mean that Person B therefore or thereby remains unmoved.
Or, it is not the case that when Person A is overcome by hysteria, Person B therefore is not.
• contrast is lost
The word
when changes the contrasting comparison of
it leaves some unmoved and
overcoming many others.ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) Psychohistorians disagree about why, at times, [mass hysteria] leaves some unmoved
despite of overcoming many others.
• idiom and diction error
This option uses the phrase
despite of rather than the correct idiom
despiteThere is no such thing as
despite of.This option is trying to trick you into believing that you are reading
in spite of, whose meaning is identical to that of
despite.
We can use
despite or
in spite of, but not
despite of. The latter isn't a thing.
Suppose that you did not know the idiomatic language.
You could fall back on the fact that in English, prepositions are almost never followed by other prepositions.
Despite is a preposition.
The word
of is a preposition. Prepositions should be followed by nouns or noun phrases, not by other prepositions.
Eliminate C
Quote:
• diction/meaning error
→ Choice D begins with the adverb
where, which incorrectly indicates that the events happen in the same place.
→
where alters the contrasting comparison of
it leaves some unmoved and
overcoming many others: the word
where incorrectly indicates that the events must happen in the same place.
Eliminate D
Quote:
E) Psychohistorians disagree about why, at times, [mass hysteria] leaves some unmoved
while overcoming many others.
• I do not see any errors
• Meaning is intact. Sensible contrast is preserved.
→
While, like
whereas, means
in contrast or comparison with the fact that. Although
while has other functions, in this case,
while contrasts two events.
On the one hand, mass hysteria is overtaking many people.
On the other hand, mass hysteria is not affecting some people.
→
While also can suggest simultaneity, this way: at the same time that mass hysteria was capturing many minds, mass hysteria left others untouched.
→
While can be followed by a gerund ( verbING noun)
(While:
here). Whereas:
Here, see 2..)
The correct answer is E.COMMENTSI will keep things simple: well done, aspirants.
Your work is very good.