OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
For SC butler Questions Click Here THE PROMPTQuote:
The Supreme Court has ruled that universities
must allow the armed forces to recruit on campus unless they want to risk losing federal funding. THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) must allow the armed forces to recruit on campus unless
they want to risk losing federal funding
•
they is not ambiguous, but the sentence would probably be better without the word
they→ To decide whether a pronoun is ambiguous, ask yourself whether more than one antecedent could
logically be the target.
It does not matter that two nouns "qualify" in number as plural antecedents for
they.
As long as only one word is a logical antecedent, no pronoun ambiguity exists.
→ The only logical antecedent for
they must be universities.
The court tells the
universities what to do (allow armed forces to recruit) and, relatedly, what the consequences of not complying are (risk losing federal funds).
The
armed forces is the noun in the background.
KEEP, but tentatively, and look for a better answer.
Quote:
B)
should allow the armed forces to recruit on their campuses unless they want to risk losing their federal funding
• Diction error: use
must, not
should→ A court ruling is not a piece of advice. A ruling is a command.
You might be told by a professor that you "should" do something because it is a good idea.
If a court hands you a ruling, it is telling you that you must do something, whether or not you think that something is a good idea.
When we talk about commands, in terms of diction, we use the word
must, not
should.
• Again, logically, no pronoun ambiguity.
The armed forces are not the ones in trouble here—the armed forces are not the recipients / targets of the court ruling, and neither will the armed forces lose federal funding because such loss is a consequence of not complying with the court order. That court order is not directed at the armed forces.
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C)
should allow armed forces recruitment on campus or else
they will lose their federal funding
• Diction error: use
must, not
should• Meaning ambiguity created by pronoun ambiguity
→ In this sentence, the word
they and the phrase
or else make it possible for the words to sound as though the armed forces will lose federal funding if universities do not allow the armed forces to recruit on campus.
→ On the other hand, it is also reasonable to say that the sentence indicates that the
universities will lose federal funding if they do not allow the armed forces to recruit on campus.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D) must allow the armed forces to recruit on
its campus
in order to not risk a loss of federal funding• pronoun disagreement
→ The singular
its cannot refer to plural
universities.We know that
its refers to universities because the latter have campuses.
The armed forces may also have universities with campuses, but "the armed forces" in general is not a phrase associated with campuses.
• stylistic error (this error would be a tie-breaker in the event one were needed)
→ The phrase
in order to not risk a loss of federal funding is clumsy, wordy, and lacking in flow.
Compare that phrasing, for example, to the phrasing in option E:
or else risk losing federal funding.
Option E wins.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) must allow the armed forces to recruit on campus or else risk losing federal funding
• I do not see any errors
• as is correct in the context of a court ruling, this option uses correctly uses
must• the absence of pronouns creates a sentence without any potential ambiguity.
From verbs alone, we understand that universities must do X or risk losing Y.
• The prose is streamlined and clear.
• Pronoun ambiguity and option A
I want to be really clear: pronoun ambiguity should be among the
last things you check.
True pronoun ambiguity is fairly rare on the GMAT.
If you are down to two options and one contains absolutely no risk of pronoun ambiguity, choose that one.
Accordingly, we are going to choose option E over option A.
Stylistically, option E is superior to option A; (E) is clear and concise.
Eliminate A.
KEEP
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