The best thing to do when the sentence is long AND all underlined is to stick
the subject first
the right verb
the complement
the other elements as modifiers
The simple rule is that the sentence must follow a simple logic
A. Formalized three hundred years after Mughal emperor Akbar first introduced the concept of land ownership in the last decade, the law abolishing landownership by the aristocracy had led to the real estate boom and correspondingly increased the wealth of an average Indian by twenty percent, giving the overall economy a shot in the arm.
the verb had led is wrong. A simple past is best. Also it seems that the emperor is formalized NOT the lawB. Formalized in the last decade, three hundred years after Mughal emperor Akbar first introduced the concept of land ownership, the law abolishing landownership by the aristocracy led to the real estate boom and correspondingly increased the wealth of an average Indian by twenty percent, giving the overall economy a shot in the arm.
This looks fine
Formalized + incidental phrase + subject + simple past + modifier in the endC. Giving the overall economy a shot in the arm and formalized three hundred years after Mughal emperor Akbar had first introduced the concept of land ownership in the last decade, the law abolishing landownership by the aristocracy has led to the real estate boom, increasing the corresponding wealth of an average Indian by twenty percent.
Giving and formalized= wrong. Already offD. Having been formalized in the last decade and giving the overall economy a shot in the arm three hundred years after Mughal emperor Akbar had first introduced the concept of land ownership, the law abolishing landownership by the aristocracy led to the real estate boom and increased the corresponding wealth of an average Indian by twenty percent.
Essentially the sentence is in passive voice. OFFE. Leading to the real estate boom and, in correspondence, increasing the wealth of an average Indian by twenty percent, Mughal emperor Akbar first introduced the concept of land ownership three hundred years after the law abolishing landownership by the aristocracy was formalized in the last decade.
Atrocious sentence. Completely disconnected from formal logic. OFFB is correct