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Computational analyses of data is used for the construction of models of neural processes; these models are not intended to represent actual neurological systems.
A. Computational analyses of data is used for the construction of models of neural processes; these models are not intended to represent actual neurological systems.
A. "Analyses" is a plural subject and does not match the singular verb "is." Second, "for the construction of" is wordy.B. Models of neural processes are constructed by computational analyses of data, and it is not intended to represent actual neurological systems.
B. Passive voice, "models… are constructed… by analyses", is stylistically weak and usually incorrect in the GMAT SC.C. Computational analyses of data are used to construct models of neural processes; these models are not intended to represent actual neurological systems.
C. Correct. "Analyses… are…" maintains subject-verb agreement, the infinitive "to construct" is concise, and, lastly, "intended to" is idiomatically correct.D. Computational analysis of data is used to construct models of neural processes and are not intended for the representation of actual neurological systems.
D. "Analysis" is a singular subject, and the second verb "are" is plural.E. Models of neural processes and that are not intended to represent actual neurological systems are constructed by using computational analyses of data.
E. As in B, passive voice is used incorrectly. Second, the prepositional phrase "of neural processes" is not parallel to the relative clause "that are not intended…"